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Created: 09/17 2007
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Category: Love

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Its Still There, I Promise

Its Still There, I Promise

I can not sleep, can not think, I just can’t live

Knowing what we lost.

Thinking back about all the times we’ve had

And how things could have gone so far.

Don’t you remember all the things I’ve done just to talk to

You, all those nights we would stay up and laugh tell noon

Remember the first time I ever talked to you, the first thing

That ive said to you, and the first time I told you love is us,

Now it seems all down the drain, something changed,

Our love has rust, but will never die and soon to fade

Your feelings have slipped away,

And I just don’t know what to say to show you your all I trust,

I love you but something’s vanished away,

Our bond is weak and you’re to blame

because now the last thing to come to your mind is us,

You just let our love be torn by words, what people say,

It gets to you slow

But stays with you day by day it never seems to go away,

and now you’ve changed Your ways,

you don’t care anymore; you’d rather go your own way

And sit here and watch as our relationship dies in vain

because you just don’t care about all that could still be there,

You don’t care that nothing has disappeared, you don’t care

That our love could always be there with us forever to the end

To never let go we could live to se the best there is to be

And we could live a lot better than you think, I promise,

But you don’t care, because something’s changed,

There’s a love forgotten, something’s not the same

Your personality has rotted and now the only things

I se in you are things I hoped id never se, your not

The person I thought you would be

And it seems like our love has nothing left to show,

So please just return to me, become the person you used to be

And then you’ll se what this love could truly be, I promise.

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On March 26th 2008 insanebeauty Said: 
insanebeauty it makes me sad because right now everyone is abandoning me so i can really relate...its REALLY good
On September 29th 2007 xxlostsoul14xx Said: 
xxlostsoul14xx awww, i really like this great job!
On September 27th 2007 pinkheffalump Said: 
pinkheffalump its good
On September 24th 2007 Hellcro Said: 
Hellcro So sad. =( But it is beautifully written.
On September 18th 2007 Teresia07 Said: 
Teresia07 sad...but lovely :)
On September 17th 2007 emorockgrl333 Said: 
emorockgrl333 awww it makes me sad :[ but i likey :D
On September 17th 2007 Javellef Said: 
Javellef Your words express a sadness that the heart feels when love seems to slip way. You have done a great job of expression your emotions.
On September 17th 2007 kelseygroves16 Said: 
kelseygroves16 aww thats soo sweet! mmy bf would NEVER ever do something like this he just doesent care but anyway great poem i loved it!!! =)
On September 17th 2007 sadee309 Said: 
sadee309 aw, i'm really sorry, i am.. but i do care, and we're not at the bottom of my list, this relationship is my first priority.. and i'm terribly sorry that it's come this far.. =( i don't want to be this person and it hurts me to know that that's who i've become to you.. i'm weak, i'm sorry.. i'm willing to change if you'll help me.. sorry, i love you.