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Its Still There, I Promise |
Its Still There, I Promise
I can not sleep, can not think, I just can’t live
Knowing what we lost.
Thinking back about all the times we’ve had
And how things could have gone so far.
Don’t you remember all the things I’ve done just to talk to
You, all those nights we would stay up and laugh tell noon
Remember the first time I ever talked to you, the first thing
That ive said to you, and the first time I told you love is us,
Now it seems all down the drain, something changed,
Our love has rust, but will never die and soon to fade
Your feelings have slipped away,
And I just don’t know what to say to show you your all I trust,
I love you but something’s vanished away,
Our bond is weak and you’re to blame
because now the last thing to come to your mind is us,
You just let our love be torn by words, what people say,
It gets to you slow
But stays with you day by day it never seems to go away,
and now you’ve changed Your ways,
you don’t care anymore; you’d rather go your own way
And sit here and watch as our relationship dies in vain
because you just don’t care about all that could still be there,
You don’t care that nothing has disappeared, you don’t care
That our love could always be there with us forever to the end
To never let go we could live to se the best there is to be
And we could live a lot better than you think, I promise,
But you don’t care, because something’s changed,
There’s a love forgotten, something’s not the same
Your personality has rotted and now the only things
I se in you are things I hoped id never se, your not
The person I thought you would be
And it seems like our love has nothing left to show,
So please just return to me, become the person you used to be
And then you’ll se what this love could truly be, I promise.
| On March 26th 2008 insanebeauty Said: |
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| it makes me sad because right now everyone is abandoning me so i can really relate...its REALLY good |
| On September 29th 2007 xxlostsoul14xx Said: |
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| awww, i really like this great job! |
| On September 27th 2007 pinkheffalump Said: |
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| its good |
| On September 24th 2007 Hellcro Said: |
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| So sad. =(
But it is beautifully written. |
| On September 18th 2007 Teresia07 Said: |
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| sad...but lovely :) |
| On September 17th 2007 emorockgrl333 Said: |
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| awww it makes me sad :[ but i likey :D |
| On September 17th 2007 Javellef Said: |
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| Your words express a sadness that the heart feels when love seems to slip way. You have done a great job of expression your emotions. |
| On September 17th 2007 kelseygroves16 Said: |
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| aww thats soo sweet! mmy bf would NEVER ever do something like this he just doesent care but anyway great poem i loved it!!! =) |
| On September 17th 2007 sadee309 Said: |


