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fill me up with sorrows

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i cant stand to watch,

but im afraid to act,

to all of the daggers going straight through the hearts of those who care.

im letting them fade,

they wanted me to be happy,

but i cant stand that thought in the back of my head,

of how i lost you,

i loved you,

you loved her,

ill never get you back.

it makes me wonder,

if you would even care,

if i just took my life with a bullet,

to remember all the times,

you hurt me,

fuck you.

 

 

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On October 9th 2007 Babydotz Said :
Babydotz You have a lot of feeling in this poem, sadness, anger and others. It is just somewhat hard to read. Great start tho. I think you could do much better!