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Not Satisfied
So depressed I don't know what to do,
what to do next I have no clue.
Living my life by what tomorrow brings,
counting the days that pass with strings.
Strings that end up making days,
days becoming months,
months ending in years,
people celebrating New Years with cheers.
But for me it's just one more year that passed,
and im still the same,
I don't know if to feel sad, shame, or who to blame.
My wish is to change who I am,
I guess I'm not satisfied.
Always thinking I did something bad,
not knowing what to do, always sad.
Waiting for the day I escape to be free,
and forever being my true me.
© 2007 Belen Gonzalez
what to do next I have no clue.
Living my life by what tomorrow brings,
counting the days that pass with strings.
Strings that end up making days,
days becoming months,
months ending in years,
people celebrating New Years with cheers.
But for me it's just one more year that passed,
and im still the same,
I don't know if to feel sad, shame, or who to blame.
My wish is to change who I am,
I guess I'm not satisfied.
Always thinking I did something bad,
not knowing what to do, always sad.
Waiting for the day I escape to be free,
and forever being my true me.
© 2007 Belen Gonzalez
| On February 12th 2008 numba1chic Said : | |
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i agree, very deep and meaningful. i like your style of poetry :) |
| On September 1st 2007 metzymutzy Said : | |
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Wow. I like it. It's deep, and amazingly written. |
| On August 29th 2007 thelion88 Said : | |
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great poem very deep!! |
| On August 28th 2007 darkbliss99 Said : | |
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oooo this ones my favorite |
| On August 27th 2007 HRHHermione Said : | |
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Good... |
| On August 25th 2007 alexia66 Said : | |
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nice work, again |


