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Suicide

Views (122) Anger Created on 8-22-07 Flag
Sometimes I think suicide is the answer to all my questions,
my head hurt so much because of all this tension.
Please help me I don't know what to do,
I feel like I have no worth, no value.
I'm suffocating I need air,
I ask for help and no one cares.
I need a savior someone who can help me,
from my life which is so stormy.
Then my savior comes so loving and sweet,
everybody knows him no one can cheat.
When in hard moments he is there,
when you do something good or bad, he is always aware.
My savior is god,
who made my life broad.
Whom I can trust,
and help my life adjust.
© 2007 Belen Gonzalez
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On February 15th 2008 HumanF17TH Said :
HumanF17TH WOW!this is an amazing poem....good work!
On February 15th 2008 HumanF17TH Said :
HumanF17TH WOW!this is an amazing poem....good work!
On February 12th 2008 numba1chic Said :
numba1chic i like this alot, very nicely written and i know alot of people can relate. keep up the good work :)
On September 5th 2007 NaomiElizabeth Said :
NaomiElizabeth deep lots of people can relate to this including myself nice work.
On September 1st 2007 metzymutzy Said :
metzymutzy Wow. Thats deep. I like it.
On August 29th 2007 nellybaby41 Said :
nellybaby41 omg! great.poem! i luv it!
On August 28th 2007 LQQKatME6 Said :
LQQKatME6 Good Poem...read my suicide story...it's a whole other aspect but it's truthful and sad...thanks
On August 26th 2007 Cutepinkie13 Said :
Cutepinkie13 i like this alot.
On August 25th 2007 alexia66 Said :
alexia66 nice work, lots of feelings in there