bekahrox2014

isnt good cuz was made when i was like 8

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My Poems

+ 6	Suffocating
+ 7	A valentine to all my friends(new ones 2
+ 34	My first kiss
+ 6	Kindergarten=the shiit.
+ 6	Do you remeber?
+ 4	I hate you
+ 1	Please Listen

My first kiss

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Created on 6-4-07

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Sun sets and sunrises,this moment locked in time.

Your breath stops,our eyes lock,your heart beats next to mine

The ground shakes,my body shivers

It feels like a total bliss,

this is my first kiss

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On June 11th 2007 bekahrox2014 Said :

	wow.I didnt think this one would get that much attention.shaweet.

On June 5th 2007 bekahrox2014 Said :

	if you like this on check out my poem Suffocating poem.

On June 4th 2007 cowgirl182 Said :

	wow thats really good, I like it alot, :D :D :D

On June 4th 2007 marlana79 Said :

	this is wonderful for an 8 year old. I like:)

On June 4th 2007 Cheerchic00 Said :

	I think it is cute.And it is funny because of the person I like.

On June 4th 2007 t4nn1e Said :

	Awwwwwww! That's nice!!! My mate wrote a poem like this!!! His was a bit diff tho... it goes like this... Seat lifts and seat rises,this moment locked in time. My legs... cold, wall covered in mould, I made it just in time... The room shakes,my body shivers It feels like a total bliss, this is my first piss

On June 4th 2007 mcihellejane Said :

	I think that it is cute WHENEVER you wrote it~

On June 4th 2007 mcihellejane Said :

	I think that it is cute WHENEVER you wrote it~