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To Someone Special.

Views (23) Other Created on 4-15-08 Flag

I meet you not long ago.

 But how could I know

That we would grow

To be close.   At first it seemed,

You were an old fool.

But you have deemed

Yourself, oh, so cool! 

In you, I want to confide,

But, I still run and hide.

From that, that I fear

But, you say I’m dear. 

I want to trust you.

Because of another,

I cannot trust you.

I hate to feel this way. 

You gave me more compliments,

In two months, than I have had

In close to three years.

This is what makes me mad. 

You, whom I barely know,

Can see more of me,

Than my own father

Whose house I’ve lived in

For more than 15 years.  

Someday, this man I call my father,

Will walk me down the aisle

But I feel that I’ll want it to be you

Because you make me feel worth all that I am!
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On May 17th 2008 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane I actually have a close friend who had another male figure (roll modelish and fatherlike) walk her down the isle when she got married. Her father was there, but she felt like her boss was more of a father than her own. It's a bit different, 'cause her parents were divorced and her dad lives kinda far away, but he's never called to talk or even sent her a b-day card. So I guess I don't think it's wrong, but in your situation only you know what is in your heart.
On April 15th 2008 beautyisthewol Said :
beautyisthewol For anyone who reads this, is it wrong to feel strongly for someone who is old enough to be a grandparent but has no relationship to you what so ever?
On April 15th 2008 beautyisthewol Said :
beautyisthewol It didn't post right, but you get the point!