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I am been betrayed by close friends.

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Betrayal

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I thought you were my friend,

And couldn’t be hurt by you,

You proved me wrong, in the end.

I see now I should have knew,

now I won’t be able to mend

something so sad, something so blue.

 

You have hurt me for the last time,

I feel so melancholy

It even makes me rhyme,

But, you and me

It’ll take so much time

Our friendship will never be

For you can’t undo your crime

 

You hurt me only once,

But it was your only chance,

So now I can say

I want you to go a way

And leave me be

Can’t you see

 

You really hurt me,

I cannot trust you anymore

I cannot see

How you just walked out the door

To something so sweet

But you can’t have it no more.

 

In the end you’ll be

Forever happy

Without me

And my jealousy

So now leave me be.

And you won’t be bothered by me.

 
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On March 13th 2008 UnSane420 Said :
UnSane420 beautiful work.
On March 5th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth Writing is such a wonderful way to vent all that pent up frustration. I like how you ended it with
"You won't be bothered by me."
You can't make someone love you, so it's good you can move forward without putting yourself through all the heartache of trying to do the impossible.
On February 26th 2008 Autumnr1 Said :
Autumnr1 i know how you feel, people aren't always as they seem
On February 15th 2008 Chihuahuahw Said :
Chihuahuahw you dont know how many times i felt that and couldnt put it in words.nice job.
On February 9th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said :
tumblegrl1994 This is deep. Very good!
On February 9th 2008 williamscott7 Said :
williamscott7 Wow, that was really sad and emotional! Keep up the good work!
On February 5th 2008 dsouthernlily Said :
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Very touching. very sad.