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Created: 01/16 2008
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Category: Tragedy

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If You Decide to Die

Don't leave us here,

In this wonderdul place.

We love you, dear!

We love to see your face.

 

If you decide you want to die,

I won't know what to do.

You won't be able to soar so high.

I won't be able to see you.

 

If you want to go,

I won't be able to wait for you

Don't you know,

In the sky so blue.

 

If you decide to die,

Can you not see?

I will want to cry,

And what it will do to me.

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On May 17th 2008 mcihellejane Said: 
mcihellejane Very smooth rhythm for sure. I love the honest simplicity in your writing. You created such a heartfelt piece. One that makes me want to smile and cry at the same time!! Loved it~
On May 6th 2008 godschild4974 Said: 
godschild4974 the flow is absolutly amazing! your such a great writer
On February 27th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said: 
sixtiesdoll I love this~ I agree that it flows beautifully and lovely choice in words also~
On February 15th 2008 Chihuahuahw Said: 
Chihuahuahw i know exactly how you feel in this poem
On February 14th 2008 jessigirl224 Said: 
jessigirl224 nice.. your poety is very nice...
On February 9th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said: 
tumblegrl1994 very emotional
On February 9th 2008 williamscott7 Said: 
williamscott7 This is incredibly emotional, love the way it flows!
On February 5th 2008 Bexi93 Said: 
Bexi93 the flow is brilliant and your deepth of emotion is great
On February 1st 2008 Autumnr1 Said: 
Autumnr1 nice it flows beautifully