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behind these glasses
behind these glasses
are eyes filled with doubt
don't know what to see
and don't know what to believe
behind these glasses
are eyes filled with love
seeing that one guy
and your eyes thumping like your heart
behind these glasses
are eyes filled with depression
always sad, never happy
always quiet and always alone
behind these glasses
are eyes that wanna commit suicide
| On May 21st 2008 Laralei Said : | |
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I like the way you express how there are things that block people from seeing what's really going on, and the use of eyes because "eyes are the gates to our soul" type deal. Very well written, nice pattern. |


