fading away
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Created on 7-4-08
i sit alone
i dont have any one
my life is fading away
i have given up
thier is no one
i cant find some one
my life is fading away
one day i'll wake up
and i'll try to drink from a cup
my life is fading away
but i wont be able
to hold a cup stable
my life is fading away
i will be gone
i'll fit in with the sun
my life has faded away
Please Login to post comments| On August 17th 2008 Voodoo19 Said : | |
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i like it very depressing and dark. It is free verse right caus ei write that to and i like it :D |
| On August 7th 2008 avrilnstreak Said : | |
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yh srry i was out of focus wen i rote this
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| On August 6th 2008 barbarian1 Said : | |
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its pritty good, but its a bit hard to find the flow, it seems to change |
| On August 4th 2008 littlepixie199 Said : | |
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i like it, thanks 4 telling me. i can kind of relate to that since i've had emotional problems all school year. i do hope ur not writing this from expereince
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| On July 24th 2008 CelestialAeon Said : | |
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Wow pretty deep. Very good poem! |
| On July 23rd 2008 Akatsuki13 Said : | |
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Very Good. ^_^ |
| On July 6th 2008 williamscott7 Said : | |
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wow, that's really sad. I hope and pray you can find someone who'll help you. Excellent poem! GOD BLESS YOU ALL!!! |
| On July 5th 2008 MomoHoshi456 Said : | |
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thats better than i can i do poems |
| On July 4th 2008 MegluvsAv Said : | |
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thts really gd loz |
