Created By
Rate this Poem
|
+
27
|
so far away |
|
+
14
|
lonly |
|
+
19
|
i wait |
|
+
12
|
theres only you |
|
+
14
|
nathan |
|
+
13
|
HOW DO I |
|
+
18
|
a womens love |
|
+
16
|
lost love |
|
+
13
|
new love |
|
+
11
|
heaven sent |
|
+
20
|
thats sexy |
|
+
16
|
mother |
|
+
9
|
thinking of her |
|
+
9
|
thoughts of you |
|
+
11
|
as you sleep |
WHAT IF
Views (41)
Created on 7-6-08
What if I was there,to run my fingers through your hair,what if every moment you could feel how much I care.What if I could stop time,and it was just you and I,would that be ok,would you ever question why.
What if my every breath,was against your face,would that be enough to make your heart race.What if ever tear you cried,was a drop of love,like raindrops that fall,from the heavens above.What if everynight you made me scream your name,and in the morning when we wake,I make you do the same.
What if all these things,are just a sure sign,that your heart is where is belongs,wrapped around mine.
What if I sent a message,on a beautiful white dove,and told you I wait for you,with a heart full of love.
What if all these what if's were a reality,then there would be no what if's,because you'd be right here with me.
Please Login to post comments| On August 23rd 2008 ausjo Said : | |
|
Really lovely Dennis. Can see you are back in full charm offensive form. haha. Go get em Tiger. ;) |
| On July 7th 2008 joabizz Said : | |
|
I loved, loved, loved it!!! like Jaime it's as if you were writing it for me!! and every other women who reads it will most likely feel the same!! Thank you for writing again, now you give me something to look forward to when I come on this site!! beautiful.... ;=) |
| On July 7th 2008 browneyes33 Said : | |
|
what if I told you - your poetry makes my heart feel like it's pounding out of my chest. Beautiful Dennis!! I love how I can read your poetry and feel you are writing it to me. I'm sure everyone reading it can, thats what makes it such an awesome read. :) |
