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FOREVER WITH ME
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Created on 1-7-08
like a ray of sunshine, i hold in my hand,someday i must let go,but for now i dont understand.how this came to be,and when it may pass, but for now this magic,i want to last.the day may come , when we may say goodbye,and i will open my arms and let you fly.when you love like this, you must know how to let go,and the true beauty of it all will begin to show.
if only for a moment,as i feel frozen in time,could we stop the earth for a little while..would it be a crime??...to unlock the door, and go running through, to spend every waking moment...with someone just like you.the reality is , i have searched high and low...for a love like this to blossom, but for now i only know, that you are a treasure, a most delightful thing...you amaze me with your mind..you make my heart sing.
when the time comes, that we go our seperate ways ...i will fight away the tears...and the colors of grays. but i will sit back and smile , at the times we've shared ..all the mornings waking with you...all the ways you cared. the joy of knowing , that you are happy and safe..will paint a permanent smile , all over my face
Please Login to post comments| On January 21st 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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The eternal flame. That was beautiful. |
| On January 17th 2008 Foreverlyn Said : | |
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It's sad in tone, but always your writings celebrate being in love and loving each moment. |
| On January 7th 2008 joabizz Said : | |
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oh, gosh,, this one took my breath away,, such a way with words, is this for someone? cause it sure sounds personal... wow, very nice, a bit sad, but happy,, if you could understand that.. Love the title!! great job Dennis.. |
| On January 7th 2008 ausjo Said : | |
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So beautiful Dennis. I had some gentle music playing in the background while I read this and it really worked. haha. I think it could totally be turned into a song. Nice job. |
