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LOVE TAKES ITS TIME

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FULL OF NOTHING

Views (96) Pain Created on 12-5-07 Flag

LIKE A WINDOW , WITHOUT A PANE..........LIKE GRAY CLOUDS IN THE SKY , WITH NO SIGN OF RAIN.

LIKE A BIRD WITHOUT ITS WINGS...LIKE A CHOIR WITHOUT A VOICE , AS IT SINGS.

LIKE THE DAWN OF A NEW DAY,WITHOUT THE LIGHT .......LIKE NEEDING A WARM BLANKET , IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT.

LIKE A WORLD OF COLOR , BUT ITS ALL DIM AND GRAY.....LIKE KNOWING WHAT YOU WANT , BUT NOT KNOWING WHAT TO SAY.

LIKE A HEARTFELT CRY , WITHOUT THE TEARS.......LIKE A MOMENT IN TIME , THAT FEELS LIKE YEARS.

LIKE A FLOWER THAT WAITS , TO BE KISSED BY THE SUN.......LIKE A SLAP IN THE FACE , AFTER ALL YOU HAVE DONE.

LIKE A RACE TO THE FINISH , BUT NO END IN SIGHT.....LIKE A MAN READY FOR BATTLE , BUT THERE IS NO FIGHT.

LIKE SNOW ALL ALONE , AT THE MOUNTAIN TOP....LIKE A WHIRLWIND OF EMOTIONS , IT JUST WONT STOP.

LOVE IS SOMETHING WE SHOULD ALL FEEL, BUT ITS SOMETHING THAT YOU CAN ALSO KILL.I HAVE HAD IT , AND IT WAS A JOY TO KNOW.THE FEELING YOU GET FROM ANOTHER , AND TO WATCH IT GROW.THE FEELING I HAD , I WANT AGAIN... THE FEELING OF BEING IN LOVE....SO TIRED OF FEELING THE WAY I DO.....LIKE THE WAY I FEEL ABOVE.

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On January 22nd 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth It is better to have loved and lost, than to have never loved at all. That fear of being hurt keeps too many from ever experiencing the elation of being in love. Waiting for the one who will love you back is the hard part. Listen to your heart and never give up hope. Peace
On December 13th 2007 Foreverlyn Said :
Foreverlyn Great work.
On December 8th 2007 browneyes33 Said :
browneyes33 I think this is Beautiful. I love it an can relate.. Thanks for sharing sweet pea
On December 7th 2007 Ssaasssssyyyyy Said :
Ssaasssssyyyyy awwwe.Very nice.
On December 6th 2007 ausjo Said :
ausjo Beautifully put Dennis.
On December 6th 2007 joabizz Said :
joabizz As I always say, to put it on paper or computer is another way of getting it out of your body.. So kudos for you doing that and moving on..