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GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Rate this Poem
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so far away |
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lonly |
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i wait |
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theres only you |
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nathan |
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HOW DO I |
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a womens love |
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lost love |
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new love |
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heaven sent |
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thats sexy |
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mother |
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thinking of her |
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thoughts of you |
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as you sleep |
LIP SERVICE
ok...........my hearts seems to be on strike , so i will try my lips , where are all my friends , i could use some tips . my fingers are ready , and my eyes are rested , but me writing like this , as never been tested. i start a line or two , but it doesnt feel right , and i want to turn off this machine , and say goodnight.
but the poet in me ,is now in control , so with my mouth , i write this flow . dont know how it may turn out , or if it will get posted , i might as well share this , cause my brain feels roasted . i've tried the pen and paper , and the keyboard also , but the poetry in me , through my heart it must go .
my fingers are shaking , and my leg is a jumping , my brain reaches down , to make sure my heart is pumping ..LOL!!!. for i know where its at , and its not in my chest .... i think i've said enough , so to shut up would be best :-). please forgive me , for things i might say , and if you dont like it , then just turn away .
the poets out here , im sure can relate, that my heart and my mind , will not comunicate . i feel like i may , have smoked some grass , or just maybe my brain , kicked my hearts ass ..lol!!. i love doing this , like a fat kid loves cake , but no love poems tonight , my heart will make .
i so wanted to write one , but i could'nt find what to say , so i will let it marinate , for just another day.
| On January 22nd 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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HAHAHA I do relate in a big way. I love to write poetry and often I go in and don't know what it is going to be until I'm finished. I once wrote one called "Linguistic Babble" only I really had been smokin' the wacky amoungst other things (clearing throat) haha I might have to go dig that one out of my old old old box of assorted writings on bar napkins. haha |
| On October 25th 2007 joabizz Said : | |
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LOL this is great! I hate when I get writers block, it is so funny cause you actually ended up with a great poem!! Awesome... |
| On October 25th 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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Lol. Good job. Think we've all had those moments. Seems like you managed a cool poem anyways. |


