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been here too long!!!!

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*LONLINESS*

Views (93) Pain Created on 10-9-07 Flag

ever feel life inside you that is not your own?.ever felt like you would give your life ,or die trying?. ever feel like the tears that roll down your cheek ,are worth crying?.to have someone thats alive ,and alive in you as well, to throw yourself in front of danger, so close you can smell that smell.or to cry in the night, when they are gone,cause your in a living hell.

i miss these things , i have to admit, the things most men love to avoid, are the things inside , i will never forget . to wake and have her sleepy face , staring into your waking eyes . to hold her close , and let her know , you'll be there through all the cries.to disagree , and smile , for you both think you are right . but , you stop and laugh, and give them a kiss , theres really no need to fight .

never take her for granted , for one day she may be gone, when you get back home. then you will feel , what i feel , its called being alone .

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On January 22nd 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth :((((((((((((( sniff sniff
On October 20th 2007 missykitty1 Said :
missykitty1 GREAT POEM! YOU DID AWESOME! NOW RETURN THE FAVOR WILL YA?!!?
On October 17th 2007 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane This one is just so lonely..I love the way your words come from your heart-I'm sorry it's sad right now-but things will get better if you just believe!
On October 16th 2007 joabizz Said :
joabizz I agree very sad, but beautiful,, your heart is very humble... one day another humble heart will see that.. :) write me!!
On October 12th 2007 nevermine Said :
nevermine ...I could hear this one straight clear through the windows of my heart!...
On October 12th 2007 Ssaasssssyyyyy Said :
Ssaasssssyyyyy awwe how beautiful:)
On October 12th 2007 ausjo Said :
ausjo Oh Dennis. It's so sweet, but I'm sad you feel like that.
On October 11th 2007 browneyes33 Said :
browneyes33 Oh Dennis, this is a wonderful expression of your emotions. so profound! I love this. Great Job writing and this is very sad :( if you need to talk I'm here