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WHAT I WOULD SAY ,TO A ANGEL OF MY OWN

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*BREATHTAKING*

Views (184) Love Created on 10-2-07 Flag

The light hits your eyes , and makes a mighty sparkle , like the light from the moon on the water, in the dead of dark .where do you hide those wings my angel , i know they are there , but if i never see them , i will never care . like a theif in the night , you have stolen my heart , and for you my lady , with it i will part .

i feel you here , and i see you in everything , and just the thought of you , makes my heart want to sing .like a mountain stream , cascading as it falls , and for you i strip my armor , and breakdown my walls . you have brought the light , where the dark use to play , and for that i honor you , in everyway .

when you open your heart to me , then you wont  have to rely , on your eyes to see. your the air that i breath ,and the blood that makes me whole , the very strenght , in my once broken soul . you dont see that your beautiful , but to me you are , like a new born child , like the brigthest shining star .

you've sent waves of love , and i feel them crash over me , and you inspire me to be , all i can be .your a feather of love , that has tickled my heart , and you are the benchmark , from where everything is to start . i will never settle for less, than what i see in your eyes , and a sea of sadness flows over me , as we say our goodbyes. 

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On January 22nd 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth You're a feather of love that has tickled my heart. What a great line. Coming from you though it sounds sincere. Now I know why you wrote what you wrote in your bio. The boys should be flocking to this one to grab your smooth expressions. Look out ladies, we've a poet in the haus. Raising the roof. haha
On October 17th 2007 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane I love the simple passion in this one. Very nice!
On October 12th 2007 Ssaasssssyyyyy Said :
Ssaasssssyyyyy this is beautiful too:) I love your work:)
On October 8th 2007 Foreverlyn Said :
Foreverlyn I must say I feel in love with this poem, so beautiful, we all have these angels flowing about but some how darkness seems to opaque the beauty there exist beyond our eyes.
On October 4th 2007 ausjo Said :
ausjo "for you i strip my armor , and breakdown my walls". Lovely.
On October 3rd 2007 songbird1023 Said :
songbird1023 That's my bro!!! Wow, you are a romantic soul like your sister. I'm very proud of you!!!
On October 2nd 2007 browneyes33 Said :
browneyes33 I agree, very beautiful!!
On October 2nd 2007 joabizz Said :
joabizz This is beautiufl!!!! you are a hopless romantic, your imagery was so clear. I hope you get your angel... great works!!!!!!! :-)
On October 2nd 2007 angelofwar4 Said :
angelofwar4 Oh my goodness, this is so romantic & loving - but then a little bitter-sweet at the end, you did this perfectly! I love it! You can see the details so well, I adore the way you describe your Angel. :-D