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WHAT I WOULD SAY ,TO A ANGEL OF MY OWNRate this Poem
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so far away |
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lonly |
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i wait |
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theres only you |
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nathan |
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HOW DO I |
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a womens love |
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lost love |
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new love |
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heaven sent |
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thats sexy |
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mother |
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thinking of her |
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thoughts of you |
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as you sleep |
*BREATHTAKING*
The light hits your eyes , and makes a mighty sparkle , like the light from the moon on the water, in the dead of dark .where do you hide those wings my angel , i know they are there , but if i never see them , i will never care . like a theif in the night , you have stolen my heart , and for you my lady , with it i will part .
i feel you here , and i see you in everything , and just the thought of you , makes my heart want to sing .like a mountain stream , cascading as it falls , and for you i strip my armor , and breakdown my walls . you have brought the light , where the dark use to play , and for that i honor you , in everyway .
when you open your heart to me , then you wont have to rely , on your eyes to see. your the air that i breath ,and the blood that makes me whole , the very strenght , in my once broken soul . you dont see that your beautiful , but to me you are , like a new born child , like the brigthest shining star .
you've sent waves of love , and i feel them crash over me , and you inspire me to be , all i can be .your a feather of love , that has tickled my heart , and you are the benchmark , from where everything is to start . i will never settle for less, than what i see in your eyes , and a sea of sadness flows over me , as we say our goodbyes.
| On January 22nd 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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You're a feather of love that has tickled my heart. What a great line. Coming from you though it sounds sincere. Now I know why you wrote what you wrote in your bio. The boys should be flocking to this one to grab your smooth expressions. Look out ladies, we've a poet in the haus. Raising the roof. haha |
| On October 17th 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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I love the simple passion in this one. Very nice! |
| On October 12th 2007 Ssaasssssyyyyy Said : | |
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this is beautiful too:) I love your work:) |
| On October 8th 2007 Foreverlyn Said : | |
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I must say I feel in love with this poem, so beautiful, we all have these angels flowing about but some how darkness seems to opaque the beauty there exist beyond our eyes. |
| On October 4th 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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"for you i strip my armor , and breakdown my walls". Lovely. |
| On October 3rd 2007 songbird1023 Said : | |
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That's my bro!!! Wow, you are a romantic soul like your sister. I'm very proud of you!!! |
| On October 2nd 2007 browneyes33 Said : | |
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I agree, very beautiful!! |
| On October 2nd 2007 joabizz Said : | |
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This is beautiufl!!!! you are a hopless romantic, your imagery was so clear. I hope you get your angel... great works!!!!!!! :-) |
| On October 2nd 2007 angelofwar4 Said : | |
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Oh my goodness, this is so romantic & loving - but then a little bitter-sweet at the end, you did this perfectly! I love it! You can see the details so well, I adore the way you describe your Angel. :-D |


