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lips dont beat , but a heart CAN speakRate this Poem
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so far away |
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lonly |
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i wait |
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theres only you |
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nathan |
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HOW DO I |
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a womens love |
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lost love |
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new love |
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heaven sent |
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thats sexy |
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mother |
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thinking of her |
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thoughts of you |
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as you sleep |
FROM THE HEART.... never the lips
poetry is a world of word , of beautiful color , and sounds not yet heard . it comes when it wants , and leaves when it may , but the talent and the beauty , will always stay.
its comes from my heart , and rolls off my tongue , and i wonder where my next inspiration , will come from . you cant rush it , nor can you strain , just relax and feel,the beautiful pain .let your heart take you there , and you will soon find , that a symphony of beauty , overflows in your mind .
i often think , of a different way , to express my feelings ,and what i say , but from my style , i never stray .no matter your level of learning , nor your degree of sucess, has nothing to do with this , i must confess. so if it doesnt come from your heart , than i cannot relate , and to this point , i will not debate .for i true poet , already knows , that a poem has rhymes , and beautiful flows .
we all have differnt ways , to say what we say . but , the one thing thats the same , is the heart in the way . so let it be your guide , and never give up , and a world of beauty will soon erupt .
so remember that big words , tho they have much meaning ,cant replace the little ones , with so much feeling :-). so take my words , and remeber my tips , for poetry comes from the heart , and never the lips .
| On January 22nd 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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How to write good poetry 101. Fabulous advice! Beautifully written. |
| On October 15th 2007 wchocolate07 Said : | |
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wow thats wonderful!!!:):):) |
| On October 12th 2007 Ssaasssssyyyyy Said : | |
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yep that's what I think too:) I feel my rhymes before they ever come out on paper. I believe in High School they told us that poetry was emotion in writing or something like that. This is sooo. True. So yeah another great poem:) |
| On October 1st 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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Great finishing line and some good advice. Nice one. |
| On October 1st 2007 come98 Said : | |
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love the title to this poem it's so true when it comes from the heart you feel it. |
| On October 1st 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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Very true-poetry has to come from the heart...The form and style is always interesting, but the words and emotions are what really matter to me! Thanks for sharing this one! |
| On September 30th 2007 browneyes33 Said : | |
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That's so true and you really inspired me to write something. Beautiful Dennis |
| On September 30th 2007 joabizz Said : | |
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spoken like a true Poet, yes there are so many forms of writing, from Grand word choice to the simple, but if you don't have your heart behind whatever word you choose then you have failed that poem...(just my opinion) You did great!!!!!!!!!! |
| On September 30th 2007 angelofwar4 Said : | |
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Absolutly beautiful, and you're right about the heart. :-D |


