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A DREAM I HAD AND I COULDNT GET BACK INRate this Poem
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so far away |
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lonly |
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i wait |
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theres only you |
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nathan |
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HOW DO I |
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a womens love |
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lost love |
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new love |
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heaven sent |
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thats sexy |
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mother |
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thinking of her |
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thoughts of you |
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as you sleep |
EYES WIDE SHUT
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Created on 9-29-07
A DREAM OF TWO POEPLE , SO IN LOVE , LIKE A SHOWER OF CANDY COATED KISSES , FROM UP ABOVE .WAVES OF LIFE , CRASH ON THE SHORE , AS I HOLD YOU CLOSE , TO NEVER IGNORE . YOUR SKIN ON MY SKIN , YOUR HAND IN MY HAND , LOVING YOU GENTLY , LAYING IN THE SAND .
A WALK IN THE PARK , BRINGS A VISION OF YOU , BUT I CANT REACH YOUR SPACE , AND I DONT KNOW WHAT TO DO . A HURRIED WALK TOWARDS YOU , BUT YOU KEEP STAYING AWAY , THE CRAZY WAY , DREAMS LIKE TO PLAY . I SMELL YOU IN THE AIR , AS THE WIND DANCES, THROUGH YOUR BEAUTIFUL HAIR .
I ROLL OVER , AND I SEE YOU AGAIN , ITS A BUBBLEBATH FOR TWO , SO WE BOTH JUMP IN . CARESSING YOU , I FEEL YOUR HEART BEAT WITH MINE , TO DIE AT THIS MOMENT , WOULD BE JUST FINE .LOOKING IN YOUR EYES , WITHOUT A WORD , ARE THE MOST BEAUTIFUL WORDS , I HAVE EVER HEARD.
AS WE LAUGH AND LOVE , I WANT YOU TO STAY , AND AS I WAKE , YOU FADE AWAY .
Please Login to post comments| On January 22nd 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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Your eyes are getting very heavy, you can barely hold them open, you see sheep jumping, you fall asleep, and when you wake you write a poem called I love EWE! haha Dang sheep :) |
| On October 12th 2007 Ssaasssssyyyyy Said : | |
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wow. That is very romantic. Nice Job:) |
| On October 1st 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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I was reading this and seeing it in my mind-when I got to the last line I could just see the picture getting further and further away in a foggy vision...Hmmm-hope that made sense. Anyhow, I really liked this one. You had some great imagery in it and it just kinda took me away~ |
| On September 30th 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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"As the wind dances" love that imagery. Nice one Dennis. You are the king of love poems. |
| On September 30th 2007 browneyes33 Said : | |
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awww how sweet, I swear you are perfecting your art in almost every new poem I see an improvement |
| On September 29th 2007 come98 Said : | |
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love this poem awesome !!! |
| On September 29th 2007 angelofwar4 Said : | |
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Enchanting and beautiful, yet sad as well. You do a marvelous job painting the visuals, I could see every detail you spoke of. Outstanding work! :-D |
| On September 29th 2007 joabizz Said : | |
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Ok,, now I am exhaling.. what a beautiful dream and poem.. You did an outstanding job on the visual.. Too bad you could not get back in the dream and yank the girl out..lol... I don't know whats going on, but these tittles are killing me..LOL.. great work D.. |
| On September 29th 2007 lisaljb Said : | |
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That was beautiful, great job! |
