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can anyone relate ???Rate this Poem
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so far away |
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lonly |
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i wait |
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theres only you |
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nathan |
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HOW DO I |
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a womens love |
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lost love |
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new love |
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heaven sent |
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thats sexy |
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mother |
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thinking of her |
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thoughts of you |
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as you sleep |
ITS HARD
the decision that was made , feels so wrong. i need to be back where i belong, i cannot look any further , nor see past the pain , til i feel you touch my heart , without restrain.
to laugh without you , is to not laugh at all . it wasnt MY choice , still i wait for the call .i hide my pain , of a love so missed , of lips not yet kissed, of an undeniable desire , that i cannot dismiss.
clouds of sadness, cover the skys , tears from my heart , reach up for my eyes .i am not going to make it , so why try and fake it , i have made a promise , but i feel i may break it .
what have i done , i should have never come , now theres something inside of me , that wants to run . to the safety of love , and the comfort of you , can anyone feel , what this is i go through .
| On January 22nd 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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Not what I was expecting with a title like "It's Hard" lol Was a tad bit nervous to come in. haha NOW I feel bad, mind in the gutter as it were and here you are baring your soul, and not being X rated as I presumed. Bad June Bug :) |
| On September 26th 2007 angelofwar4 Said : | |
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I've been there. *hugs* |
| On September 24th 2007 nevermine Said : | |
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I know this edge of emotion 2well!!!...aw and your words here are a perfect hue of color that explains is so well.. |
| On September 24th 2007 joabizz Said : | |
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awww, you sound so sad.. :( I have visted that unfortunate place,, sending you happy thoughts!! :))) |
| On September 22nd 2007 browneyes33 Said : | |
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I think we've all been there *hugs |
| On September 22nd 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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(((HUGS))). |
| On September 22nd 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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This did bring back some feelings from my past, so yes, I can relate. Besides feeling connected, you did a great job writing this. It flows well and sounds great! |


