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DEAR DADDYS BOSS

Views (123) Other Created on 9-2-07 Flag

dear daddys boss , can you bring my daddy home , for his been gone far to long , and mommy and i are all alone. why did he have to go , couldnt he just stay . and you sent him across the oceans , so far away . i miss him at night , when its time for bed , and i miss him lay'n with me , and rub'n my head.

my daddy is my hero , and i miss him so , dont you think its your turn , to pack up and go . my mommy crys alot , and i dont know what to say , and she sits by the phone , allnight and day . i dont have much , but you can it all, if you would plz get on the phone , and make the call , tell my daddy its time , for him to come back to us , so my mommy can smile again , as she walks me to the bus .

i will tell everyone , that you are the best , if you bring my daddy home , so he can get his rest , he needs to be home , so he can go to my game , and if hes not here in time , you will be to blame .

my birthday was last week, and mommy and i made cake , but i wasnt like the one , that my daddy can make , he missed school starting , and i was so afraid , cause he always walks me in , to my new grade . so i will let mommy know , that she dont need to cry anymore , cause that man that lives in that big white house , is bringing daddy to our front door . you can come over , and i will give you a big kiss, for bringing daddy home , so no more of my life,he will miss.

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On January 24th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth Very sweet. While reading words like "she dont need to cry anymore , cause" I could just picture a child speaking. The lack of capital letters was a nice touch too. :)
On September 17th 2007 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane A child's point of view is precious. This made me smile and want to cry at the same time-wonderful job!
On September 8th 2007 marlana79 Said :
marlana79 Nice poem:) It's kinda like what my girls are going through now. But differant at the same time:)
On September 3rd 2007 browneyes33 Said :
browneyes33 so sad and sweet like Joanie said...
On September 2nd 2007 smartblond21 Said :
smartblond21 This poem actually made me cry because thats how i felt as a little girl about my dad. awsome poem!
On September 2nd 2007 angelofwar4 Said :
angelofwar4 I like that poem, because it would've been my daughter's words to my husband's boss when he was an over-the-road truck driver. Very cool, sad poem - but it's wonderful. :-)
On September 2nd 2007 joabizz Said :
joabizz this is a very sweet and sad poem..