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The Crack of My Heart
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Created on 5-13-07
I heard the crack as my heart ripped in two
Looked down at my chest, blood seeping through
I watched as it tipped out and smashed on the floor
Gave one last thud, then beat no more
I fell to my knees, tried to piece it together,
Scraping up tissue in pointless endeavour
Pounding with fists of frustration and hurt
Watching my heart turn cold in the dirt
I picked up the shreds and held them to heaven
Cried 'Lord, please help me put this back together'
In desparation I turned to strangers around
'Can anyone help me scrape this off the ground'
Met with blank stares I wept with deep sorrow
For I knew my heart would not see tomorrow
I curled up in a ball with my heart in my hands
Waved goodbye to my life and all future plans
AS I breathed out my last and my body turned stiff
I longed for the happier times before this
Please Login to post comments| On January 25th 2008 listen147 Said : | |
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omg. you put all my feelings into words. i want to say that this poem is great, but how can pain ever be great. awesome composition! |
| On November 20th 2007 CamiLuv Said : | |
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Wow, vry beautfiul. I wirte songs and poems as well, giv me a shout out if you want to maybe write a pom together. |
| On November 16th 2007 ruskiya Said : | |
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amazing!!! |
| On October 30th 2007 AMC500 Said : | |
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Its as though I can feel your pain, almost like Im in your shoes, brilliant and haunting.... very good |
| On October 30th 2007 mydragonlord Said : | |
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the pain, the agony, so real so true. i hope i never have to go through that. beautifuly ritten |
| On August 7th 2007 nevermine Said : | |
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Pained..just beautifully!... |
| On July 28th 2007 wannabetimthe1 Said : | |
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this is beautiful..... |
| On July 10th 2007 racechick7 Said : | |
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this is the best. keep up the work. |
| On July 4th 2007 Jeremy062902 Said : | |
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I enjoyed how you captured my imagination with this. Well written! |
| On July 2nd 2007 massofwebs Said : | |
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brillian poem gd imagery nd words :]
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| On June 11th 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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nice illustration on this one-I could feel the pain and helplessness |
| On June 5th 2007 bekahrox2014 Said : | |
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damn.this poem is the shiiiiit. |
| On June 5th 2007 bekahrox2014 Said : | |
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damn.this poem is the shiiiiit. |
| On June 1st 2007 TT6034 Said : | |
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damn this is good! +1 |
| On May 30th 2007 xxxAngelicaxxx Said : | |
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your poems are beautiful! |
