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Forever Love
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Created on 5-12-07
I breathe you in
You are my air
Underneath my skin
You are my blood
My heart beat with yours
Our lives in harmony
I want to be near you
Forever closer
I feel you inside
You are my heart
Want you at my side
You are my all
My life now complete
Our lives intertwined
I want to be with you
Forever yours
I kiss you soft
Your lips are mine
I’m yours at all costs
You are my life
My existence is for you
Our lives in sync
I’ll always love you
Forever together
Please Login to post comments| On October 30th 2007 mydragonlord Said : | |
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reminds me of my Mrs, the words are similar but the emotion is the same. |
| On October 5th 2007 ynot4u2hold Said : | |
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awww this poem is da bomb. Keep up the excellent work. I look forward to reading more. |
| On July 28th 2007 wannabetimthe1 Said : | |
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the is awesome......so sweet....its sweetly awesome |
| On July 16th 2007 bonita1510 Said : | |
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aww this one is really good i really really like this one as for all of ur poems |
| On May 16th 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said : | |
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pretty |
| On May 15th 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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It's intended more as a rhyme of theme than words. Cheers though, |
| On May 13th 2007 suicidalslug Said : | |
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very nice flow without rhyming |
| On May 13th 2007 BlkWingDragon Said : | |
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Yet another good poem. |
| On May 13th 2007 ANNO22 Said : | |
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i love it |
| On May 13th 2007 usseal Said : | |
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sweet - i really like it |
| On May 13th 2007 dcmartin21 Said : | |
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real pretty:) |
| On May 13th 2007 dureall Said : | |
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very good writing. |
| On May 12th 2007 Becks78 Said : | |
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I like your poem alot Koudos |
| On May 12th 2007 SeekterBeeker Said : | |
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this makes me feel all soft inside... weird. your poetry can make me feel diffrent, good job. |
| On May 12th 2007 deadpoet Said : | |
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this one was sweet, loved it. |
