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Created on 5-4-07
Bent double, unable to stand
No one around Tears pour out in force The pain stabbing like a knife to my core The hurt engulfs me Fear grips me I must lock myself in Shut the world out Close all the curtains Pretend I’m not here Every knock Every drip Every sound Makes me flinch Is that him? Is he here to torture me? What can he want? He already robbed from me Stole my joy Took my freedom Thieved my innocence I’m a prisoner in my own home Too afraid to let my face show Bouncing off the walls But too nervous to go out Too scared of who is out there I gather all my inner strength Move closer to the door Peek out just to make sure I can do this I was strong once Don’t let this define you You have the power inside you The door opens Sunlight hits my face I hear footsteps Someone is coming Someone is there Breath escapes me Did my lung puncture? I gasp for air Panic gripping me tight I bang the door shut Fall to the floor The tears pour I have to face it This could be my life Stuck inside Pain Fear Not able to leave here Agoraphobia
Please Login to post comments| On January 21st 2008 saxaphonegirl Said : | |
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i like this one! sorry i forgot my password and i just remembered it sorry =) |
| On December 31st 2007 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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I really like the way you did this one. I could feel the despair and the hurt, and often I have wondered how someone could go through life being afraid to go outside. Very Good! |
| On October 30th 2007 shaneinei77 Said : | |
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wow..... |
| On October 30th 2007 mydragonlord Said : | |
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OO... good one. |
| On August 7th 2007 xxdeligirlxx Said : | |
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wow, i normally like aa-bb verse poems, but this is really good, I can learn from you xx |
| On August 4th 2007 emochick2 Said : | |
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this poem is great.it shows ur inner emotions and i hope the best for you. and if ur so afraid of who is out there. its me. im here for you and im waitin for you to come with me. =] |
| On June 21st 2007 mickygrl22 Said : | |
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OH MY GOD ITS LIKE U GOT INTO MY HEAD AND WROTE DOWN MY INNER MOST FEARS...UR GOOD GRL!!! MICK5150 |
| On June 17th 2007 AlexINTJ Said : | |
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one of my family members suffered from this. You hit it dead on. Amazing poem!!! |
| On May 13th 2007 thatbluewoman Said : | |
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your feelings come out really nicely :) |
| On May 10th 2007 Chris181 Said : | |
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great poem! very touching!!!!! (i found it) |
| On May 8th 2007 deadpoet Said : | |
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i cant imagine what it would be like if i couldnt go outside. i love the outdoors way too much. this is a sad fact in life, many people have it yet its hardly ever mentioned. really loved this poem. |
| On May 8th 2007 Sandwich91 Said : | |
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I cant imagine the pain one would go through in this case, for that I am slightly greatful, because I can imagine that even knowing of the pain may be traumatising. Good work |
| On May 7th 2007 LittleEmoAiko Said : | |
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wowliecompletelyandtotallyamazingandmagnificentlikewoah |
| On May 7th 2007 ssjscotty Said : | |
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another winner! |
| On May 7th 2007 ybgrreject Said : | |
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wow...my poetry sits lamely in the shadows of your colosul masertpeices... |
