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For the Longest Time |
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Sit up |
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First Date |
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Love Lost |
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The Joy of Loving You |
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Granddad...my hero |
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Flirtation |
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Brokendown Fairy |
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I'm Here |
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You |
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My Furry Friend |
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Recipe for Love |
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Let Love... |
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Childhood Revisited |
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My Prison - Agoraphobia |
Childhood Revisited
We have such fond memories of our childhood
When we chat it all seemed so good
Playing kiss chase around the yard
At valentines crafting a card
We used to have such fun I know
But would it be fun now we’re grown?
You’d yank on my pigtails and pull funny faces
We’d dart and dash and run silly races
That note you left me touched my heart
Asking if I would meet you in the park
It was so sweet when we were small
But would it be sweet now we are tall?
When I didn’t arrive it broke your heart
As a young boy you were torn apart
If I’d have known I would have come
And maybe loves young dream begun
We can’t go back and change that moment
But can we revisit it as adults?
You tell me the heart of that boy, eleven
Still lives inside now you’re 27
You’ve never got over me, your very first crush
Hearing you say it was such a rush
The feelings you felt were strong and true
But did I feel the same about you?
I remember us smiling and being flirtatious
You dating another and me feeling jealous
I’ve thought about you over the years
Wondered what he’s doing and where he is
Is it time for us to be one at last
Or should we leave the past in the past?
| On October 30th 2007 mydragonlord Said : | |
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nice, wait let me get a tissue, that is better now i can read it again with out the tears to blur my vision. |
| On August 13th 2007 demonica666 Said : | |
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awwwww young love thats always the best...great poem |
| On July 4th 2007 Jeremy062902 Said : | |
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Young love, found old, left undecided on whether to rekindle. I like the truthful simplicity of this poem. |
| On June 21st 2007 mickygrl22 Said : | |
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I REALLY LIKE THIS ONE, GLAD U ENJOYED UR CHILDHOOD CUZ I WOULDNT WANT 2 REVISIT MINE FOR ANYTHING, I MADE IT OUT ALIVE THE 1ST TIME BUT NOT SURE I'D BE ABLE 2 DO IT AGAIN...KUDOS |
| On May 7th 2007 ssjscotty Said : | |
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back in the day |
| On May 7th 2007 goldfishmurder Said : | |
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Really Awesome work. Much respect for this! |
| On May 4th 2007 wannabetimthe1 Said : | |
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I love this...I wish I could be an innocent again |
| On May 1st 2007 theresagrefer Said : | |
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i love this. |
| On April 30th 2007 amurrin Said : | |
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lol. yeah. it's nostalgia. i reunited and married mine. no bueno. =) good for a poem though!! |
| On April 29th 2007 Lookin4TruLuv Said : | |
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I love this. I wish I could go back and be so young and naiive and fun again. :) |
| On April 29th 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said : | |
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very thought provoking. Such event we miss out in our past. But if we did them you only wonder if it could change anything. |
| On April 29th 2007 MontageLiving Said : | |
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Yup. Its True. I Always Get This Happening To Me. . . |
| On April 29th 2007 Becks78 Said : | |
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I like it |
| On April 29th 2007 spasm01 Said : | |
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i think this was great,i mean this is everyones thought at one point or another in life. |
| On April 29th 2007 tswieberg Said : | |
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This is a really awesome poem...I think we have all felt this way. |


