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Childhood Revisited

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We have such fond memories of our childhood

When we chat it all seemed so good

Playing kiss chase around the yard

At valentines crafting a card

We used to have such fun I know

But would it be fun now we’re grown?

 

You’d yank on my pigtails and pull funny faces

We’d dart and dash and run silly races

That note you left me touched my heart

Asking if I would meet you in the park

It was so sweet when we were small

But would it be sweet now we are tall?

 

When I didn’t arrive it broke your heart

As a young boy you were torn apart

If I’d have known I would have come

And maybe loves young dream begun

We can’t go back and change that moment

But can we revisit it as adults?

 

You tell me the heart of that boy, eleven

Still lives inside now you’re 27

You’ve never got over me, your very first crush

Hearing you say it was such a rush

The feelings you felt were strong and true

But did I feel the same about you?

 

I remember us smiling and being flirtatious

You dating another and me feeling jealous

I’ve thought about you over the years

Wondered what he’s doing and where he is

Is it time for us to be one at last

Or should we leave the past in the past?

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On October 30th 2007 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord nice, wait let me get a tissue, that is better now i can read it again with out the tears to blur my vision.
On August 13th 2007 demonica666 Said :
demonica666 awwwww young love thats always the best...great poem
On July 4th 2007 Jeremy062902 Said :
Jeremy062902 Young love, found old, left undecided on whether to rekindle. I like the truthful simplicity of this poem.
On June 21st 2007 mickygrl22 Said :
mickygrl22 I REALLY LIKE THIS ONE, GLAD U ENJOYED UR CHILDHOOD CUZ I WOULDNT WANT 2 REVISIT MINE FOR ANYTHING, I MADE IT OUT ALIVE THE 1ST TIME BUT NOT SURE I'D BE ABLE 2 DO IT AGAIN...KUDOS
On May 7th 2007 ssjscotty Said :
ssjscotty back in the day
On May 7th 2007 goldfishmurder Said :
goldfishmurder Really Awesome work. Much respect for this!
On May 4th 2007 wannabetimthe1 Said :
wannabetimthe1 I love this...I wish I could be an innocent again
On May 1st 2007 theresagrefer Said :
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i love this.
On April 30th 2007 amurrin Said :
amurrin lol. yeah. it's nostalgia. i reunited and married mine. no bueno. =) good for a poem though!!
On April 29th 2007 Lookin4TruLuv Said :
Lookin4TruLuv I love this. I wish I could go back and be so young and naiive and fun again. :)
On April 29th 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said :
Tiffiscool16 very thought provoking. Such event we miss out in our past. But if we did them you only wonder if it could change anything.
On April 29th 2007 MontageLiving Said :
MontageLiving Yup. Its True. I Always Get This Happening To Me. . .
On April 29th 2007 Becks78 Said :
Becks78 I like it
On April 29th 2007 spasm01 Said :
spasm01 i think this was great,i mean this is everyones thought at one point or another in life.
On April 29th 2007 tswieberg Said :
tswieberg This is a really awesome poem...I think we have all felt this way.