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Created on 4-21-07
Your voice soothes me like a trickling waterfall
Dribbling down, splashing around
Your touch calms me like a warm soft sunshine
With a cooling breeze, making me at ease
Your laughter illuminates me like a striking match
Lighting up with a blaze, smoky haze
Your scent beguiles me like a dizzying drug
Making my knees weak, unable to speak
Your glance makes me nervous like a runaway teen
I want to hide, you see deep inside
Your body lying near is like a lightening fork
Rushes through my blood, feel my heart thud
Your love covers me like a powerful wave
Sweeps over my heart, Never want to part
Please Login to post comments| On October 30th 2007 mydragonlord Said : | |
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nice really nice. leaves you feeling all warm and fuzzy |
| On August 3rd 2007 villesvamp89 Said : | |
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it is a beautiful poem and reminds me of my one true love. You are truly gifted with words and the ability to turn them into works of art. Keep up the fantastic work. |
| On August 2nd 2007 autrydennis Said : | |
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omg , thats a great poem , i loved it
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| On May 15th 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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nice idea, but that's not what I wanted to do in this poem as I've used metaphors in others. |
| On May 4th 2007 wannabetimthe1 Said : | |
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thats awesome |
| On May 1st 2007 peterzshadow Said : | |
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Beautiful. *solemnly votes* |
| On April 29th 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said : | |
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SWEET! |
| On April 25th 2007 Invertigo98 Said : | |
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BOOYAH! TWO THUMBS WAY WAY UP... ;) |
| On April 24th 2007 LaneyNinjagirl Said : | |
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Awww, I love it. I would suggest some changes but that would make it less authentic. very nice miss Jo. |
| On April 23rd 2007 Lovinlif3 Said : | |
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Thats sweet! I like it! |
| On April 23rd 2007 whoavisakha Said : | |
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aww i like this poem.. soo cute |
| On April 23rd 2007 Zing18 Said : | |
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i like it, it has so many truths about it... and the real fact of this poem is this poem could work with what ever words u put in it, to an extent.... but i like it =) |
| On April 22nd 2007 Madison155 Said : | |
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i really like it... |
| On April 22nd 2007 BlkWingDragon Said : | |
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Your poem, makes me feel happy |
| On April 22nd 2007 ashleyswebb Said : | |
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very nice |
