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I’ve watched as you’ve torn yourself apart

Your own worst critic condemning and harsh

I’ve sat and listened to your tale of woe

You have no one left and no where to go

You tell me your armour is broken and dented

And you look like a soul, torn and demented

 

But I can’t help wishing you’d pick yourself up

Shake the dust of you boots and never give up

No one can rob you of your dreams but you

No one can tell you what you should do

Only you can grasp the things you desire

So stand up and start to re-stoke your fire

 

You tell me again how you can’t go on

You’re crushed and feel like you don’t belong

I listen as you curse the hand you were dealt

You tell me no one understood how you felt

You let out a sigh and call for surrender

Reach out for a hand that’s warm and tender

 

I want to shake you and tell you the world did not end

You still have life, you still have a friend

No one thing defined the person inside

One part of you lost does not mean you died

I love you and so I’ll tell you what shouldn’t surprise

Self pity is the one thing that will bring your demise

 

You look in my eyes with fear and loss

You tell me that you feel like you have been turned and tossed

You never thought life would turn out this way

You loathe the night and curse the day

I pull you close to my side, whisper in your ear

All is not lost, I am still here

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On March 30th 2008 littlelady322 Said :
littlelady322 beautiful only some one with a truly beautiful mind can write like this.
On March 21st 2008 SissyMaria Said :
SissyMaria Absolutely brilliant-My daughter in law needs to read this one---may I copy and send to her?
On March 9th 2008 jessisakura16 Said :
jessisakura16 Loved it! Keep writing! Beautiful.
On October 30th 2007 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord i think we all get to that point at one time or another, and you do feel as all is lost. nicely ritten.
On October 28th 2007 AMC500 Said :
AMC500 Love the way you convey how its important that we must move on throught tradgedy, only we can make things better for ourselves, we are not victoms but survivors
On August 2nd 2007 ausjo Said :
ausjo I've definitely been on both sides of this. I still can't decide if it is worse to feel the pain, or watch someone you love feeling it though.
On July 4th 2007 Jeremy062902 Said :
Jeremy062902 Very good. I've been on both sides of that situation so this was very moving to me. You are amazing! =)
On June 21st 2007 mickygrl22 Said :
mickygrl22 THIS IS GOOD EXCEPT I DONT THINK U KNOW WHAT ITS LIKE ON THE OTHER SIDE OR MAYBE U DO AND WERE ABLE TO HEAL!
On May 18th 2007 mikeyrocks Said :
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i loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee this. i have a friend whos bipolar and ive felt this way, hurt and confused so many times.
On May 8th 2007 shay9586 Said :
shay9586 I really like this. It makes me think.
On May 5th 2007 SeekterBeeker Said :
SeekterBeeker to be there your a good person
On May 4th 2007 wannabetimthe1 Said :
wannabetimthe1 thats great
On April 30th 2007 amurrin Said :
amurrin wow...i've felt this way a million times.
On April 29th 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said :
Tiffiscool16 This poem is the best one I've read simply because it reminds me of something I heard my friends say to me. Amazing!
On April 23rd 2007 Invertigo98 Said :
Invertigo98 WOW, We Write a lot alike! You should read and rate some of my stuff... let me know what you think. Lates, ';..;'~Invertigo98