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Brokendown Fairy

Views (1995) Pain Created on 4-14-07 Flag

She remembers a time when wishes were granted

At the wave of her wand everything was enchanted

Her sparkle that once set her wings alight

Faded like a robber slinking into the night

Her wings that once helped her soar through the air

Lay down at her sides limp and threadbare

She laments in song her deep battle scars

That deprived this fairy of her exuberant charms

 

See she spent all her time granting wishes of nations

It left little time for self preservation

And through taking on all the woes of the world

She became a women when she was really a girl

So selfless and caring and protective of others

But she needed to be protected and loved and mothered

The sparkle she gave in pieces to many

Was what she needed in return but didn’t get any

 

There are times when you see her dress start to shimmer

And at those times there is hope if only a glimmer

A kind word, a gesture, some love and understanding

Begin to repair the scars of a life so demanding

Our fairy princess may be war torn and bruised

Feeling hurt and lost, alone and abused

But through acts of friendship and selfless kindness

She’ll discover that magic is deeper inside us.

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On March 12th 2008 momsrule Said :
momsrule i love this, it's really good!(:
On February 5th 2008 dreamingraven Said :
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incredible talent, beautiful imagery, I agree, this could be be published!!!
On January 21st 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth I like how you write about things, that I would never dream of writing about. Quite creative you are.
On October 30th 2007 shaneinei77 Said :
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Beautiful!
On October 30th 2007 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord to me that sound like a poem for all mothers. beautifully ritten.
On October 25th 2007 joppysgirl Said :
joppysgirl your amazing with words!
On October 14th 2007 misha9944 Said :
misha9944 wow. i really like this poem. it flows nicely and gives you an amazing visual. my friend says she likes it too
On October 13th 2007 miseryLOVESme Said :
miseryLOVESme I like it ♥
On September 4th 2007 xoneslowdance Said :
xoneslowdance That was amazing. Great use of words
On August 6th 2007 massofwebs Said :
massofwebs kwl shows how the selfless and kind need kindness and atention even if they dnt make that need obvious
On July 15th 2007 cazpooh Said :
cazpooh wow, thats so beautiful. really lovely poem =].
On June 27th 2007 Jeremy062902 Said :
Jeremy062902 Very impressive. I enjoyed this poem. Your writings are insightful and deep. I'll say again you are probably one of the better writers I've read on this site.
On June 26th 2007 Univarsity Said :
Univarsity I like this poem a lot. I know a lot of people including myself that gives to other selflessly ignoring their own personal needs. Awesome job :)
On June 14th 2007 mickygrl22 Said :
mickygrl22 U HAVE A MAGICAL FLARE FOR WRITING...I LOVE THIS POEM MORE THEN MOST THAT ARE PUBLISHED, YOU DEFIANTLY SHOULD LOOK INTO GETTING THIS IN A PUBLISHERS HANDS!!!
On May 30th 2007 xxxAngelicaxxx Said :
xxxAngelicaxxx this is beautiful!!! you have great talent♥