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A bit depressing. lol.Rate this Poem
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Love Lost
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Created on 4-10-07
Love lost, love spent
Love stopped paying the rent
Love left with no note
No parting words
Love tainted, Love hollow
Love lived on time borrowed
Love departed and gone
No fond farewell
Love left, Love went
Love ran away, Love didn’t stay
Love abandoned ship
No survivors here
Love tossed, Love scrapped
Did love make you trapped?
Love turned out and finished
My heart has diminished
Please Login to post comments| On November 23rd 2007 xxxAngelicaxxx Said : | |
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this is really good. i like it. |
| On October 30th 2007 mydragonlord Said : | |
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nice, very nice. |
| On August 2nd 2007 autrydennis Said : | |
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awesome
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| On May 12th 2007 deadpoet Said : | |
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Love's just your every day bitch aint she? lol. good poem. |
| On May 1st 2007 holliirenepork Said : | |
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this is really good. i love it. |
| On April 30th 2007 runawaylove18 Said : | |
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really good |
| On April 29th 2007 MontageLiving Said : | |
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Its Really Good.. . |
| On April 22nd 2007 johncursaro Said : | |
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good stuff, but has trouble keeping rhythm. I like what you are saying but it sounds like you gave up on love. Love is like a weed it dies in one place and then springs up in another when you least expect it, ruining the nice neat little garden beds of our lives! Love is anarchy! |
| On April 22nd 2007 BlkWingDragon Said : | |
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Love can be an evil beast, but there is some love that can tame it. |
| On April 22nd 2007 dureall Said : | |
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Wow you do have talent how the hell did I miss this masterpeice. |
| On April 15th 2007 ralicia Said : | |
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Hey this was a good read, I like it! |
| On April 11th 2007 icfolwer Said : | |
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i like this poem but not so much cause muh love anit went yet |
| On April 10th 2007 chickenbroth Said : | |
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Well written, you have talent. |
| On April 10th 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said : | |
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I like this one the most because I can relate to this on so many levels. |
| On April 10th 2007 nascott01 Said : | |
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I like this. Usually all poems that deal with lost love sound the same to me, but this one stands out :) |
