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A portrait of the pain and joy of FirstsRate this Poem
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For the Longest Time |
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Sit up |
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First Date |
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Love Lost |
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The Joy of Loving You |
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Granddad...my hero |
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Flirtation |
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Brokendown Fairy |
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I'm Here |
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You |
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My Furry Friend |
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Recipe for Love |
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Let Love... |
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Childhood Revisited |
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My Prison - Agoraphobia |
First Date
I sat and I waited
And my breath was baited
Peering to see you
Hoping you’d come soon
I lingered and pondered
Would you come I wondered
Has my nightmare begun?
Have I been stood up?
My palms were sweaty
And my hair felt messy
Did I wear the right thing?
Would you come, would you ring?
I watched the clock ticking
Hoping and wishing
Don’t let this go wrong
Please don’t be long
Then there in the distance
Through the crowd caught a glance
You looked and you smiled
And the wait was worthwhile
I felt my cheeks redden
As you said you’d been dreading
Me not being there
That I’d agreed as a dare
We sat and we chatted
We laughed and I gathered
That actually you liked me
As much as I liked you
And then as we left
You complimented my dress
I knew I would blush
But I felt such a rush
So boldly you said
“Shall we do this again?”
And I acted so calm
As I touched your arm
“Thanks” I stuttered
My tongue stuck as I uttered
“I’d love to go out”
I finally spat out.
First date
First kiss
First glance
First bliss
| On January 21st 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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Puppy love. Sweet. |
| On October 30th 2007 mydragonlord Said : | |
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that is why it sounded so fimilier? still good |
| On August 4th 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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There is now a reading of this on my snapvine voice clips if you care to listen ;) |
| On July 4th 2007 Jeremy062902 Said : | |
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Very cute and innocent. |
| On May 11th 2007 ElComino68 Said : | |
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awww thats sweet! i luv it! |
| On May 7th 2007 casamar Said : | |
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aawwweee how cute |
| On April 30th 2007 insanepixie86 Said : | |
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awww. that is so cute! |
| On April 30th 2007 amurrin Said : | |
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i have to agree. you caught that first date excitement / dread / awkwardness very well. |
| On April 30th 2007 runawaylove18 Said : | |
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awesome |
| On April 29th 2007 PattyFannin Said : | |
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wonderful |
| On April 28th 2007 thenewguy8t88 Said : | |
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awsome :) |
| On April 28th 2007 NisaNicole Said : | |
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i love it |
| On April 21st 2007 yoursweetsmile Said : | |
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first dates. gotta love 'em. you captured it perfectly. |
| On April 14th 2007 dureall Said : | |
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agrees*....It's way to early for this typing crap. |
| On April 14th 2007 dureall Said : | |
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agress with the peep below. |


