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A portrait of the pain and joy of Firsts

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First Date

Views (487) Love Created on 4-10-07 Flag

I sat and I waited

And my breath was baited

Peering to see you

Hoping you’d come soon

I lingered and pondered

Would you come I wondered

Has my nightmare begun?

Have I been stood up?

 

My palms were sweaty

And my hair felt messy

Did I wear the right thing?

Would you come, would you ring?

I watched the clock ticking

Hoping and wishing

Don’t let this go wrong

Please don’t be long

 

Then there in the distance

Through the crowd caught a glance

You looked and you smiled

And the wait was worthwhile

I felt my cheeks redden

As you said you’d been dreading

Me not being there

That I’d agreed as a dare

 

We sat and we chatted

We laughed and I gathered

That actually you liked me

As much as I liked you

And then as we left

You complimented my dress

I knew I would blush

But I felt such a rush

 

So boldly you said

“Shall we do this again?”

And I acted so calm

As I touched your arm

“Thanks” I stuttered

My tongue stuck as I uttered

“I’d love to go out”

I finally spat out.

 

First date

First kiss

First glance

First bliss

 
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On January 21st 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth Puppy love. Sweet.
On October 30th 2007 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord that is why it sounded so fimilier? still good
On August 4th 2007 ausjo Said :
ausjo There is now a reading of this on my snapvine voice clips if you care to listen ;)
On July 4th 2007 Jeremy062902 Said :
Jeremy062902 Very cute and innocent.
On May 11th 2007 ElComino68 Said :
ElComino68 awww thats sweet! i luv it!
On May 7th 2007 casamar Said :
casamar aawwweee how cute
On April 30th 2007 insanepixie86 Said :
insanepixie86 awww. that is so cute!
On April 30th 2007 amurrin Said :
amurrin i have to agree. you caught that first date excitement / dread / awkwardness very well.
On April 30th 2007 runawaylove18 Said :
runawaylove18 awesome
On April 29th 2007 PattyFannin Said :
PattyFannin wonderful
On April 28th 2007 thenewguy8t88 Said :
thenewguy8t88 awsome :)
On April 28th 2007 NisaNicole Said :
NisaNicole i love it
On April 21st 2007 yoursweetsmile Said :
yoursweetsmile first dates. gotta love 'em. you captured it perfectly.
On April 14th 2007 dureall Said :
dureall agrees*....It's way to early for this typing crap.
On April 14th 2007 dureall Said :
dureall agress with the peep below.