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A short poem about life

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Views (650) Passion Created on 3-21-07 Flag

If the distinction between a picture or ad is a caption

If the fine line between religion and cult is a faction

If the catalyst to achieve is relative to level of passion

If the prevention of a fall is simply a matter of traction

If the difference between love and hate is a fraction

If the merit of life is based solely on what is the fashion

If the measure between peace or war is reaction

 

What cost does it bear to sit and take no action?

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On November 25th 2007 joabizz Said :
joabizz I so missed this somehow, but I am glad I found it!! superb job!!!!!!!!!!
On October 30th 2007 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord food for thought?
On July 4th 2007 Jeremy062902 Said :
Jeremy062902 This is probably one of the deepest and most well thought out poems I have ever read. I could see this on the same level as Frost. Very nice! I could ramble on about how good this is and not come close. It is powerful and moving to say the least. In a word... WOW!
On June 17th 2007 NaomiElizabeth Said :
NaomiElizabeth very nice
On May 13th 2007 joshattack Said :
joshattack Oh My God! This piece, I absolutely love. I knew just from the structure that that last line would make it and I made myself not look dow a moment too soon. I love it. I'd vote many, many times if I could.
On May 12th 2007 gamerchick02 Said :
gamerchick02 this is by far one of the best, if not THE best, poems i've ever read. awesome job! you're really becoming a great inspiration to me, being a new writer myself. u don't have to, but plz check out my work! i've only got 2, but there will be more to come, but any criticism or input or compliments would be very helpful. thanx, and great job!
On May 12th 2007 savethefrogs Said :
savethefrogs interesting... i really like it =)
On April 30th 2007 amurrin Said :
amurrin wow...very unique. love this.
On April 30th 2007 runawaylove18 Said :
runawaylove18 =D
On April 29th 2007 PattyFannin Said :
PattyFannin great job.
On April 25th 2007 jdof08 Said :
jdof08 wow. likez it. very thoughtful...
On April 22nd 2007 BlkWingDragon Said :
BlkWingDragon Short and deep...sweet
On April 21st 2007 limpnoodlez Said :
limpnoodlez its kool
On April 21st 2007 spasm01 Said :
spasm01 wow,i like it pretty deep also,makes me think. love rhymin poems,though i cant pull em off myself though.
On April 14th 2007 dureall Said :
dureall yeah I like it too