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For the Longest Time
From the first breath
To the last step
We have walked this road together
For the longest time
From the first touch
To the walk away
We have walked in step together
For the longest time
I wish I could know that one word to say
That one precious way
That would take this pain away
Honey I know we’ve both been so wrong
But if we could strong
I know we’d still belong
For the longest time
From the first glance
To the last dance
We have shared this sweet romance
For the longest time
From our first kiss
I knew there would be more of this
We would share our lives together
For the longest time
Oh I know that we could make it on own
But I don’t want to be alone
If only you find it in your heart
Please come back and be my guiding star
| On April 7th 2008 Liz912 Said : | |
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Heya, uhhh...I'm in a band, we love your song. Could we sing it at our concert? |
| On April 7th 2008 laurgarud1 Said : | |
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very nice, is it a slow song? |
| On March 14th 2008 Jacob12492 Said : | |
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Very well put together |
| On February 12th 2008 listen147 Said : | |
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i love this one! its so nice! |
| On October 30th 2007 mydragonlord Said : | |
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well um at a loss for words well done. |
| On October 26th 2007 AMC500 Said : | |
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Its no wonder this poem has done so well. Wonderfully written, a tale of romance and wanting. So close yet so far away.... |
| On October 19th 2007 Lovelyeyes0 Said : | |
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love it... |
| On October 2nd 2007 DayLove Said : | |
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Wonderfully done. Sweet and sentimental, fave |
| On August 2nd 2007 coltaw Said : | |
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very nice, a great poem of pain and love. You can sense the sincerity in your words. Very good |
| On June 30th 2007 barbigirl1 Said : | |
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I really like this its so cool! |
| On June 27th 2007 Jeremy062902 Said : | |
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You are a very talented writer. Definitely one of the better poems that I have read on this site. I enjoyed how you blended the repitition in there. You really made it work. Well done!
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| On June 27th 2007 Wiborn Said : | |
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very nice. u are an awesome writer. keep it up! |
| On June 18th 2007 f2daerg2i2e Said : | |
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hey um wats a kudo? oh and good poem/song |
| On May 12th 2007 gamerchick02 Said : | |
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this is absolutely beautiful! u have a very special talent, and you use it very well! keep up the work! :) Kudos! |
| On May 12th 2007 savethefrogs Said : | |
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nice =) |


