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Just some random musings on lifeRate this Poem
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For the Longest Time |
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Sit up |
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First Date |
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Love Lost |
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The Joy of Loving You |
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Granddad...my hero |
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Flirtation |
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Brokendown Fairy |
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I'm Here |
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You |
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My Furry Friend |
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Recipe for Love |
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Let Love... |
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Childhood Revisited |
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My Prison - Agoraphobia |
Have you ever?
Ever messed up, want to turn back time?
Ever felt that life had no reason or rhyme?
Ever kicked yourself for hurting someone dear?
Ever wished you'd not gotten so damn near?
Ever contemplated was this how it's meant to be?
Ever hoped your feelings they would finally see?
Ever throw caution to the wind and done something daft?
Ever thought you'd crack a rib from how hard you laughed?
Ever found someone to make your heart skip a beat?
Ever had a wound that cut you so deep?
Ever felt so crushed you thought your life would end?
Ever trodden paths not knowing where they wend?
Ever smiled from deep within and hoped they wouldn't notice?
Ever felt confused and totally unfocussed?
Ever opened up so much it made you feel afraid?
Ever had a dream, but watched it start to fade?
Ever sensed the future is more daunting than the past?
Ever wish the years wouldn't run away so fast?
Ever let the tears run freely on your face?
Ever felt a touch that made your heart quicken pace?
Ever took a gamble and prayed it would pay off?
Ever felt alone, happy, frightened or lost?
Ever been a kid again and splashed in a puddle?
Ever felt that life is one complicated muddle?
| On November 15th 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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It has come to my attention that 'daft' not everyone understands. HAHA. It just means 'silly' really. |
| On November 12th 2007 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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Only one woman in my life has been able to get those emotions out of me. i loved her so much...I still do. but ultimatlely it was unrequitted. i felt each of those emotions as i read them...very good. |
| On November 3rd 2007 alvard Said : | |
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OMG this honestly made tears come down....ive felt ALL of that and it made me realize a lot of stuff..LOVE IT!!!! |
| On November 2nd 2007 500nets Said : | |
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yes |
| On November 2nd 2007 lisaljb Said : | |
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Wow, you basically described most of everyones life, this is very touching, good work! |
| On November 2nd 2007 dsouthernlily Said : | |
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THat is AWESOME. Your Very talented |
| On November 1st 2007 Msmonkey93 Said : | |
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wow...that wuz juss stunning....it realli makes u think...i liked it....BEAUTIFUL! |
| On November 1st 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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This is a great way to express yourself! |
| On November 1st 2007 lilangel9102 Said : | |
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that was one of the most meaningful and beautiful poems i have ever read!!!!!!!!!! and yes to all the above |
| On November 1st 2007 morbidangel585 Said : | |
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i really liked this. nice job =] |
| On November 1st 2007 AMC500 Said : | |
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Very imaginative and truly captures my soul |
| On November 1st 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said : | |
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have deffinately felt most of these even now I still have some of these feelings pulling through. Great Poem! |
| On November 1st 2007 FamousOne777 Said : | |
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Nick Hogan gives this two thumbs up lol Good Job |
| On November 1st 2007 countryfreak13 Said : | |
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A lot of yesing 4 me!! lol This is cool :) Keep up your great talents of writing! :P |
| On November 1st 2007 browneyes33 Said : | |
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very good, the answers would be yes, yes, yes!! Good Job!! |


