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Bath Time

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As an infant my sis and I would share

We would moan and grumble whilst washing our hair

The soap would always sting my eyes

As she slyly splashed, caught me by surprise

 

A little older it was often a time for mum

To read me a story whilst I sucked on my thumb

I would grumble when the time arrived to get dry

As mum combed my hair I would start to cry

 

When the tomboy stage hit I hated it more

Being clean I thought was such a bore

I would moan that I should be out with my friend

But always felt better when clean in the end

 

As a teen I would lock myself away for hours

Gone were the days of rushed cold showers

I would pluck and prune and make myself pretty

Hoping to be noticed by a boy I found witty

 

In my 20’s I would start to share it with him

Sometimes when he lay there I’d cheekily jump in

Sometimes still alone when I got the chance

But often the scene for the spark of romance

 

As a woman it became my haven away

To wash off the dirt of a stressful day

The trusty friend who cleaned me through time

Always helped me to relax and clear my mind

 

Middle age and it was firmly set in routine

Marked in my diary as time to get clean

If he jokingly tried to climb in while I bathed

I would splash him away as I ranted and raved

 

Getting older the nurse would lift me in

Gently rubbing the soap over wrinkled skin

I would sometimes tear thinking of earlier times

When into the bath on my own I could climb

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On January 21st 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth This is really good. I loved the journey you just took me on.
On November 26th 2007 unknownwolfie Said :
unknownwolfie wow .. this z awesome! great job .. nd so true!
On November 12th 2007 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 I love finding poems that can shed a new perspective on what is considered ordinary.
On October 31st 2007 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane I love the life journey that this one takes you through..I love the whole idea of it and as always you did a beautiful job in writing it!
On October 31st 2007 killerkid33 Said :
killerkid33 i Love it. Its so true in life.. I Like the whole life experences...i give it a 10
On October 30th 2007 loradoman Said :
loradoman wow. I always love perspectives of growing older. You did this very nicely in a way that it relates to everyone and on top of that it is a great read. Envy to you lol.
On October 30th 2007 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord wow yes having read most of the coments too, i have to agree beautifuly ritten, lovely flow, love the time line.
On October 29th 2007 Sandwich91 Said :
Sandwich91 This is very nicely done! I like it a lot ^^
On October 28th 2007 thatbluewoman Said :
thatbluewoman wow! i dont take baths because it wastes water, but this poem is so good!!! kinda makes me feel that i SHOULD start taking baths....
On October 28th 2007 massofwebs Said :
massofwebs kwl
On October 26th 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said :
Tiffiscool16 ecxcellently done. It reminds me of a poem I had read by Shakespear how it went starting from an infant ending with a time of infancy again. Great Job!
On October 26th 2007 Vestque Said :
Vestque I always love your poems and this is no exception. Great job as always :D. Gonna recommend this one to my friend when she gets online, lol.
On October 26th 2007 Wyldemiller Said :
Wyldemiller Very well written :) HOw hot are the showers anyway? lol
On October 25th 2007 AMC500 Said :
AMC500 this poem captures the pure essence of your creativity, I am truly amazed
On October 25th 2007 browneyes33 Said :
browneyes33 This is the sweetest poem.. Omg!! It is awesome