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For the Longest Time |
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Sit up |
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First Date |
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Love Lost |
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The Joy of Loving You |
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Granddad...my hero |
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Flirtation |
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Brokendown Fairy |
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I'm Here |
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You |
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My Furry Friend |
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Recipe for Love |
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Let Love... |
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Childhood Revisited |
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My Prison - Agoraphobia |
Bath Time
As an infant my sis and I would share
We would moan and grumble whilst washing our hair
The soap would always sting my eyes
As she slyly splashed, caught me by surprise
A little older it was often a time for mum
To read me a story whilst I sucked on my thumb
I would grumble when the time arrived to get dry
As mum combed my hair I would start to cry
When the tomboy stage hit I hated it more
Being clean I thought was such a bore
I would moan that I should be out with my friend
But always felt better when clean in the end
As a teen I would lock myself away for hours
Gone were the days of rushed cold showers
I would pluck and prune and make myself pretty
Hoping to be noticed by a boy I found witty
In my 20’s I would start to share it with him
Sometimes when he lay there I’d cheekily jump in
Sometimes still alone when I got the chance
But often the scene for the spark of romance
As a woman it became my haven away
To wash off the dirt of a stressful day
The trusty friend who cleaned me through time
Always helped me to relax and clear my mind
Middle age and it was firmly set in routine
Marked in my diary as time to get clean
If he jokingly tried to climb in while I bathed
I would splash him away as I ranted and raved
Getting older the nurse would lift me in
Gently rubbing the soap over wrinkled skin
I would sometimes tear thinking of earlier times
When into the bath on my own I could climb
| On January 21st 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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This is really good. I loved the journey you just took me on. |
| On November 26th 2007 unknownwolfie Said : | |
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wow .. this z awesome! great job .. nd so true! |
| On November 12th 2007 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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I love finding poems that can shed a new perspective on what is considered ordinary. |
| On October 31st 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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I love the life journey that this one takes you through..I love the whole idea of it and as always you did a beautiful job in writing it! |
| On October 31st 2007 killerkid33 Said : | |
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i Love it. Its so true in life.. I Like the whole life experences...i give it a 10 |
| On October 30th 2007 loradoman Said : | |
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wow. I always love perspectives of growing older. You did this very nicely in a way that it relates to everyone and on top of that it is a great read. Envy to you lol. |
| On October 30th 2007 mydragonlord Said : | |
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wow yes having read most of the coments too, i have to agree beautifuly ritten, lovely flow, love the time line. |
| On October 29th 2007 Sandwich91 Said : | |
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This is very nicely done! I like it a lot ^^ |
| On October 28th 2007 thatbluewoman Said : | |
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wow! i dont take baths because it wastes water, but this poem is so good!!! kinda makes me feel that i SHOULD start taking baths.... |
| On October 28th 2007 massofwebs Said : | |
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kwl |
| On October 26th 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said : | |
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ecxcellently done. It reminds me of a poem I had read by Shakespear how it went starting from an infant ending with a time of infancy again. Great Job! |
| On October 26th 2007 Vestque Said : | |
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I always love your poems and this is no exception. Great job as always :D. Gonna recommend this one to my friend when she gets online, lol. |
| On October 26th 2007 Wyldemiller Said : | |
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Very well written :) HOw hot are the showers anyway? lol |
| On October 25th 2007 AMC500 Said : | |
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this poem captures the pure essence of your creativity, I am truly amazed |
| On October 25th 2007 browneyes33 Said : | |
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This is the sweetest poem.. Omg!! It is awesome |


