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The cynic in me coming out. lol.Rate this Poem
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My Prison - Agoraphobia |
Love Online
Our keyboards met across a crowded chatroom
You could almost say it were love at first type
Our broadbands connected and it started so soon
Faces glowing in monitor light
Eagerly you asked ‘state your a/s/l’
Shaving off a year I gladly responded
My smile spread as you shared yours as well
Already I felt as if we had bonded
It struck me your face looked awfully familiar
Shrugging it off as some soul connection
I uploaded my pic, when I was 200lbs slimmer
And waited to watch you type your affection
Just looking at your profile made my heart skip a beat
That face and body were just so hot
I worried the you were out of my league
But when you complimented me back I soon forgot
From there you asked me all about myself
The best details I shared, the rest I left out
In turn I asked you of life love and wealth
You edited too, now I have no doubt
We interfaced for hours under the internet sky
‘Lol’ing at what I thought were jokes
Built up in my mind was this perfect guy
Has fun with his friends, takes care of his folks
I felt the warmth of happiness from your cute smiley :o)
In turn I winked with reckless abandon ;o)
You seemed so open, how honest should I be?
It started to feel like this meet was less random
Exchanging emails I felt so excited
For I thought cyberyou could be the one
‘You’ve got mail’ I saw and was so delighted
I knew our ‘relationship’ had just begun
After weeks of chat and mail back and for
You finally asked what I’d been hoping
“Shall we meet and explore this love some more?”
I waved goodbye to nights of moping
When the day arrived I anxiously prepared
Would you mind that I wasn’t all I had said?
Perhaps there was more I should have shared
But I couldn’t get your picture out of my head
When I touched down at the airport my stomach flipped
The anticipation almost too much to bear
In my hand your photo I tightly gripped
As I hoped to God that you’d be there
I searched for your face in the arrival lounge
But couldn’t see you anywhere
In disappointment I almost turned around
But then a saw a sign saying ‘cyber-her’
But who was that awaiting me here?
It must be your driver for it wasn’t you
I double checked the picture I’d held so dear
He looked nothing like it, oh what to do?
“Excuse me sir, are you awaiting a friend?”
I ventured in a mousey tone
As he looked at me I thought his stare would not end
I just wanted to quickly dart back home
As he spoke back the horrific truth was exposed
As his voice sounded just like cyberyou
“Must have missed her” he said as the doors were closed
It finally clicked that he was you
I turned with tear in eye and walked away
You thankfully hadn’t guessed it was me
How could you have led me so astray?
I indignantly thought ‘I’ve always been me’
I returned and found my inbox full
‘Where were you darling? Did I somehow miss you?’
The sight no longer gave my heartstrings a pull
‘I was standing there just waiting to kiss you’
Weeks passed and your mails came less and less
I ignored them not knowing what to say
I couldn’t bring myself to ever confess
We’d both lied I found out to my dismay
I moved on to a chatroom I’d not been before
Where a new cyber love I started with glee
A new profile my heart began to adore
Of a picture I felt I’d seen on TV…
| On November 13th 2007 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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that was pretty much my last relationship except that i was completly open with her about my imperffections and all. she was not. her lies were on the egregous *sp end. i was hurt because i dont just open to people and i did with her in good faith and to show my trust and she couldnt to the same...great poem. |
| On November 4th 2007 TheQueirdo Said : | |
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cynic indeed. wicked good |
| On November 2nd 2007 dsouthernlily Said : | |
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Awesome!!! |
| On October 30th 2007 mydragonlord Said : | |
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ah yes should i stay or shuld i go for this here passion i do not know. the lies that we spun, cut to deep for ether one. the question, to meet or not is easily answered, never brake the spell that the internet can create, the truth can cut deeply. love the poem. |
| On October 24th 2007 ghettogkiva Said : | |
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i liked it very good i felt like dat once .... neva meet dem tho |
| On October 20th 2007 Ssaasssssyyyyy Said : | |
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hahaha! That's why I don't meet people online. Oh that and you never know if they are psycho:) |
| On October 20th 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said : | |
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Really awesome poem, using a modern day senario that many can relate to and that's really cool. |
| On October 19th 2007 joabizz Said : | |
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How sad,,, this was such a touching poem.. great job!!! |
| On October 19th 2007 SSanborn0788 Said : | |
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I met the love of my life through a chat room. We dated for 3 years w/o ever meeting. When we broke up we stayed best friends for another 3 years, still never having met. We are now back together and doing great. We've met at this point though. haha. And I'm actually moving to his state to go to school and be with him. |
| On October 19th 2007 Lovelyeyes0 Said : | |
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Very nice. What is sad, is that some people do this all the time. Ever heard Online by Brad Paisley. There is a lmao song. |
| On October 19th 2007 nwirotod Said : | |
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I like it |
| On October 19th 2007 nwirotod Said : | |
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I like it |
| On October 18th 2007 Wyldemiller Said : | |
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Lol nice job. I would have to say that is happening all over the world as we speak. Very cheeky :) |
| On October 18th 2007 500nets Said : | |
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very catchy and a topic i've never seen set to rhyme before, rare indeed, the last line is killer and wraps up the poem very nicely |
| On October 18th 2007 tswieberg Said : | |
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This is a poem that hits on the reality of everyday life. I am definitely impressed, I love it. |


