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Without Rose Tinted Glasses

Views (329) Other Created on 10-15-07 Flag
I'm not telling you life is easy *I won't say that it's a breeze *I'm not gonna tell you it's all rosy *There's no pain and no disease ** For I am one whose eyes were opened *To evil that lurks around *For I am one who naively trusted *Had dreams crushed on the ground ** I won't tell you folk are distinctly good *If you look them deep within *I won't say that there aren't those with faults *Who will always choose to sin ** For I am one who life abused *When openly befriending strangers *For I am one whose naivety *Has sometimes led to danger ** I will tell you to always look for wisdom *And never follow the masses *Always look around for the good and pure *But without rose tinted glasses **
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On March 1st 2008 gamerchick02 Said :
gamerchick02 this was so well written, kudos! great job! sorry it's taken me so long to comment, i haven't been on in a long time. lol. nice job, keep up the great writing!
On January 3rd 2008 f2daerg2i2e Said :
f2daerg2i2e that is really good and creative i lyk it my favorite one on here so far. keep writing buddy! (dont get scared,im friendly)
On December 31st 2007 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 My rose colored glasses have changed themselves to a dark shade of black. I went from one extreme to another. I used to trust everyone and now I trust no one
On November 13th 2007 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 excellent....and true...there are sharks out there with a keen sense for finding those they can manipulate.
On October 30th 2007 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord sad that life is like that, isent it? well ritten. enjoyed it.
On October 20th 2007 Sandwich91 Said :
Sandwich91 Good work ^^ I like it
On October 18th 2007 savethefrogs Said :
savethefrogs very nice =) haha it's funny i wrote a poem called "rose colored glasses" or somthing like that in 8th grade and i hekka forgot about it until now =)haha i think i will look for it
On October 18th 2007 Wyldemiller Said :
Wyldemiller I would have to say that is spot on what life should be about. Lovely imagery and nice point dear :)
On October 17th 2007 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane this has a really strong message in it-especially when you added in the bits 'bout yourself. I loved it!
On October 17th 2007 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard WOW! Great poem. The last line really makes the poem, too.

I loved this one from start to finish. More like this please (for me anyway).
On October 16th 2007 thecolorblack Said :
thecolorblack jo I love your poems! they are all cute and cuddly like those kittens!
On October 16th 2007 joabizz Said :
joabizz I love this poem,,, very well said..:)
On October 16th 2007 darkmatters Said :
darkmatters nicely done =]
On October 16th 2007 killerkid33 Said :
killerkid33 its really good. Reality never hurts anyone...Great Job
On October 15th 2007 autrydennis Said :
autrydennis i really love this poem!!!!!..i can relate to this totally ..wonderful job my friend:-)