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Local Lady

Views (224) Other Created on 8-12-07 Flag

Local celebrity everyone knows

Someone will see wherever she goes

That someone will pass on the news to a friend

Her whereabouts spread in usual trend

 

Local princess of hearts, can do no wrong

The locals feel to them she belongs

If she were to slip, or do something rash

The town folk would burn her quick as a flash

 

Local girl on the town, everyone watches

Every move she makes causes people to gossip

From the day she were born, by them she was owned

One foot out of line, and she’ll be disowned

 

Local lady in waiting, the helpful sort

They chomp at the bit for the day she is caught

Her selflessness constantly misunderstood

They fear she’ll bring down the neighbourhood

 

Local woman of beauty, some would say

As they watch her wend on her merry way

Yet jealousy causes some to despise

The emerald green tint to her eye

 

Local lady or tramp, they will decide

Judgement follows wherever she hides

So boldly she strolls down the streets of the city

And realises that they are the ones to pitied

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On October 30th 2007 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord you have a way of reflecting every day life in the most beautiful poem keep them coming.
On August 24th 2007 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard Extremely well written. You definitely have talent.

... and thanks for commenting on my poem :)

On August 23rd 2007 savethefrogs Said :
savethefrogs wow this is great, i like the style =)
On August 13th 2007 thatbluewoman Said :
thatbluewoman great job! this is a good one too!!
On August 13th 2007 joabizz Said :
joabizz this was pretty good, just wondering,, what inspired you???
On August 12th 2007 browneyes33 Said :
browneyes33 I really like this..Great Job!!
On August 12th 2007 500nets Said :
500nets did you have a particualr person in mind when you wrote this?
On August 12th 2007 akrovaz Said :
akrovaz This is really pretty good. I especially liked how the "local ..." beginning of each line changed symbolizing changes over the course of time. Very well written.
On August 12th 2007 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane I love this one-I especially like the first lines with the different views of "her".
On August 12th 2007 autrydennis Said :
autrydennis very good job ,i really like this ....keep it up now !!, tc