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Hearts truly entwined beat in sync

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Views (192) Love Created on 8-8-07 Flag

Your ache is my ache

Your hurt is my pain

Your burden my load

Your joy is my gain

Your cross I carry

Your weight I share

Your greatest anguish

My deepest despair

Every heartfelt emotion

Every cut and scar

I feel it with you

Whether near or far

 

Your smile is my warmth

Your laugh my song

Your pleasure my fortune

Your strength makes me strong

Your delight is my joy

Your glee my reward

Your beautiful face

My double edged sword

Every road you travel

Every path you cross

I walk it with you

No matter the cost

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On October 30th 2007 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord OO... good i say good,
On August 31st 2007 autrydennis Said :
autrydennis BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!, i loved it
On August 16th 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said :
Tiffiscool16 Very sweet Poem! Sends a very stong message that many people truely want to hear sometimes...like well me.
On August 12th 2007 akrovaz Said :
akrovaz Very touching
On August 8th 2007 Jeremy062902 Said :
Jeremy062902 Very nice and smooth, Jo. I loved it as always. =) It was very touching. I loved the line My Double Edged Sword.
On August 8th 2007 massofwebs Said :
massofwebs thats a cool poem and it kept my attention till the end which not all poems on this site do. Its really quite good