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Tinkling the Ivories

Views (184) Lyric Created on 8-4-07 Flag

My fingers run softly over the keys

Voice breaks out in sweet melody

I'm thinking of you and this is your song

To you I belong

 

Fingers darting finding the chords

Penning a song of the one I adore

I'm singing of you and this your song

The one who keeps me strong

 

Lullaby don't seem so sweet

Love's lyric can not compete

I'm finding it hard to write a beat

That does justice to my love

I'll tinkle on the ivories

Exploring as I touch the keys

Trying hard to find the melodies

That do justice to my love

 

The notes ring out in harmony

Expressing what you mean to me

I'm writing for you and this is your song

I hope you'll come along

 

Words pour out on writers page

My feelings for you quickly uncaged

I'm singing for you and this is your song

The one that I belong

 

Lullaby don't seem so sweet

Love's lyric can not compete

I'm finding it hard to write a beat

That does justice to my love

I'll tinkle on the ivories

Exploring as I touch the keys

Trying hard to find the melodies

That do justice to my love

 

 

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On October 30th 2007 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord to whom ever this is ritten they would be a fool not to love it.
On August 12th 2007 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane I love the thoughts that when into this one-unique and very sweet n full of soul. Again, I love your writing style with repeating lines and such..
On August 6th 2007 dureall Said :
dureall agrees with the peeps below
On August 5th 2007 autrydennis Said :
autrydennis great job , i loved it .....i love the piano as well mt friend,found out i had long fingers at an early age lol !!! . have a great weekend , and again , i loved it
On August 4th 2007 coltaw Said :
coltaw awesome. just awesome. "love's lyric cannot compete" is a very good line. I like the way you write
On August 4th 2007 joabizz Said :
joabizz this was very nice, I play piano as well.. well by ear.. I can relate...
On August 4th 2007 browneyes33 Said :
browneyes33 I really enjoyed this..beautifully written
On August 4th 2007 Jeremy062902 Said :
Jeremy062902 Very nice! I could really see you at the piano, struggling to find the words. I loved it. I'm such a fan! lol