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Created on 8-3-07
You've brought me back my smile
Like the sun breaking through the clouds after a cold winter
You've helped me laugh again
Like a child having their first fit of uncontrolable giggles
You've made my heart feel again
Like stiff numb limbs awakening and coming alive
You've given back my hearts' song
Like the beautiful sound of a songbird ushering in the spring
I'm forever in your debt, forever locked to you
For you made me come alive, awakened my heart from sleep
Please Login to post comments| On October 30th 2007 mydragonlord Said : | |
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to have someone in your life that is able to do that for you is increadable. it is something we all should have. |
| On October 23rd 2007 loradoman Said : | |
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It's very descriptive. Makes it connectable and that's why it's a good read. That and it instantly puts a smile on your face having been there. |
| On August 4th 2007 Jeremy062902 Said : | |
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very sweet |
| On August 3rd 2007 coltaw Said : | |
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You use imagery and metaphors really well. They make your poems really easy to relate to |
| On August 3rd 2007 joabizz Said : | |
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Thats a sweet poem... |
