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Views (177) Tragedy Created on 4-4-07 Flag

Where have you been all my life?

Thats what he said.

Cheezy pick up line,

but it got me into bed.

He was up all night

room filled with cigarette smoke

our connection felt so right

this relationship was no joke.

Still up at 6 playing PS2

I said "your smile is amazing"

he said "just like you"

Days turned to weeks

which soon turned to months

words cant describe my feelings for you

you simply left me speechless

what could I do.

Now my life is great

when it comes to seeing you

I just cant wait

I am so in love

This weekend is his birthday

mine the day after

We had so much to do all day

dinner that night

then the club

Things happend that night

so I couldnt make it to the club

I told him it was all right

go out and have fun

He called me on his out

he said he needed to talk

I said "what about"?

he said "ill call you when I get home"

dont worry baby, its good"

I closed my eyes for bed

with nothing but him

running through my head

Im so happy, sleeping with a smile

Three hours later that night

my phone was ringing crazy

with an urgent flashing light

I awoke with a huge smile

even though i was alone

to see 12 calls missed

all from " BABYs home"

I picked up the phone

said "hey baby, do ya miss me or what"?

expecting to hear "yes"

all I heard was a cry

Thats when i got the news

That my baby had died.

So I went to the hospital

and I saw him lying there.

theres nothing I can do

his life I could not spair.

I would give up anything

to feel your touch

baby your the one

that I miss so verry much!

 

My baby died on the way home from the club that night. He was in a car accident 3 miles from his house. It has been over a year now, everything I do reminds me of him! I dont think I have come to terms with his death.. I still want to call him up or go over his house, then I step into reality and realize hes gone.

R.I.P. J.P. I miss you soo much and I love you, im sorry I never told you that.

 

 

 
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On July 16th 2007 hayrob Said :
hayrob OMFG, You Really Know Whats Going On With Me Then. Really Sorry And You Know I Mean It Cause Im Where You Use To Be. ttyl
On July 14th 2007 xmissinux07 Said :
xmissinux07 OMG. I am soooo sorry to hear about your loss.
On July 6th 2007 iheartmyrp Said :
iheartmyrp Wow... there have been FEW times that I've read a poem that gave me chills down my spine. I'm sorry something so tragic happened to you, I can't even begin to understand how you feel. But you are an AMAZING poet. That was emotional, touching, and quite frankly, beautiful. I really liked it! =)
On June 28th 2007 joelfrd Said :
joelfrd Its really heartfelt, and im srry bout your loss.
On June 26th 2007 Gigglez200969 Said :
Gigglez200969 very good poem!Very deep and meaningful!Im really sorry to hear of your loss!This was really touching!Keep your head up and keep writing you have a very great talent!!!
On June 22nd 2007 dirtyd321 Said :
dirtyd321 Amazing poem, I'm very sorry to hear about this tragic event though, it's sounds like your a strong individual, life sometimes has a wierd way of expressing itself to some of use but somewhere along the way we begin to understand that everything happens for a reason, although some reasons are left unexplained.
On May 26th 2007 salamanteri Said :
salamanteri this's a great poem.. yet so sad and deep.. bet you miss him, sorry for your loss..
On May 13th 2007 chickenbroth Said :
chickenbroth This touched me love. I'm so sorry for you loss, if something happened to Tim.........your strong to be able to write about somthing that cuts this deep. Thanks for sharing this with me.
On May 13th 2007 goldfishmurder Said :
goldfishmurder Good Luck with that.
On April 18th 2007 dureall Said :
dureall So sorry for your loss, I lost my gf as well, was a long time ago now, but there is still a hole in my haert, a piece missing I can never get back. I still grieve the loss, And the loss of my friend earlier this year bout broke me apart. I try to deal with the pain through the artwork I create. This touched me. Again so sorry for your loss, I hope you find closure through this....Peace out.
On April 4th 2007 atmercedes Said :
atmercedes Please leave me some comments, thank you. ♥