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"you only get one shot"

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Created on 3-10-08

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Verse 1-
So I guess, this is where Im supposed to say hello
I imagine people in the places Im supposed to be
tryin not to lose track of my words
But I always wind up losin them in the end
Blinded by the fact that I can never find the light
Should I introduce myself, and have you say my name
Fifteen minutes past the hour,
and you still dont know what Im about
I shut the blinds so they wont see a thing
This make believe movie has been on repeat
I need to make this a feel real kind of film
Watch what Ive got in mind,
get ready for this feature presentation
all im countin on is you to get this right

Chorus-
I can show you how to hold a gun
I can show you how to shoot a gun
All without getting caught
I can show you how to get blisters
All without getting cut
I can show you how to kill
All without feeling trapped in guilt
(and i can show you a side of me you've never seen before)

Verse 2-
I tried to make this as understandable as possible
I forced people to reenact my planned punishment
For all, for the world,
this is for you, for not being there
I cant seem to speak in the correct terms
Im supposed to speak in
im not getting my thoughts out with no concern
I can do anything without feeling broken
Regret has never been a problem of mine
im silently rotting in a place with no one home
All goodness that has been left here has been taken away
And Im left with nothing to do to pass the time
ill try this, I just thought of something, is it in the script?
im taking my best shot, cuz i only got one

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On March 12th 2008 firerocket67 Said :

	thats really good, and it makes perfect sense to me...keep it up Hillz!

On March 11th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :

	I think it makes sense and gives us something to think about. Interesting write!

On March 11th 2008 mydragonlord Said :

	i like. it was strange, i was listening to a song called "brothers in arms" by Dire Straits. and can hear your words to a similar tune. nicely done!!

On March 10th 2008 lisaljb Said :

	I definitley like the ending! Very nice! Well done! And yes it makes sense! :]

On March 10th 2008 assumetheworst Said :

	what this is basically about is, me trying to make a movie of someone killing everyone and proving to you that im a good teacher with experience....does it make sense? :D

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