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"creation"
i can feel my heart beat in my chest
after bad thoughts are put to rest
ill make this an ending tragedy
when i make the sun go away forever
ill have you begging for light
ill stand here and watch my creation
ill say now, look what ive done
ill make this mean only one word
destruction is a form creation
so ill it make it happen
as hard as it gets
ill make the whole world fall to pieces
ill never get tired of these words
stand by me and watch what ive done
make this stand as a high point of your life
make this memory stick to your head
as each day dies,
watch the darkness fall all around us
stand by me, and watch my creation
| On December 5th 2007 edwardlover92 Said : | |
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great |
| On December 5th 2007 cloud132475860 Said : | |
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Greatness |
| On December 4th 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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Nice work! |
| On December 4th 2007 lisaljb Said : | |
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wow! very nice! |
| On December 4th 2007 drea12301994 Said : | |
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Goody. this one's good. |
| On December 4th 2007 firerocket67 Said : | |
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this si awesome too....I LOVE YOUR WORK CHICA!!! AMAZING! |


