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First Kiss

Views (136) Love Created on 3-22-07 Flag 
Lost in a blinding hot shower of stars
My world has contracted to fit in your arms
Enveloped in you and I cannot be saved
As my heart leaps towards you, bound by its cage
Every last nerve ending searing with fire
As my conscience is slowly consumed by desire
The taste of your lips and the scent of your skin
Where love and the rest of my life will begin
And as my last defences collapse at your feet
I surrender myself in becoming complete.
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On August 27th 2007 LordKumil Said :
LordKumil Wow, thats really good. I love it. :)
On August 17th 2007 wchocolate07 Said :
wchocolate07 man ur good!!! this is so beautiful
On June 4th 2007 miltarybabe09 Said :
miltarybabe09 oh! how sweet !!!
On April 25th 2007 morbidgir1 Said :
morbidgir1 Very good!
On April 21st 2007 ausjo Said :
ausjo WOW. That is great. Really like it. Whoever inspired it is a lucky lady. ;)
On April 20th 2007 dragonslilbit Said :
dragonslilbit very romantic i love it
On April 5th 2007 pinkpanther93 Said :
pinkpanther93 thats awsome
On April 3rd 2007 susanrenee Said :
susanrenee wow! i wish i could rite about happy love instead of sad love! its awesome!