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INSANITY RISING

Views (170) Anger Created on 10-29-07 Flag

by the time

the cut has scabbed

and the bump healed

and the bruise disappeared

and the welt went down

and the tears dried

and the dent unbent

and the scars smoothed

and the discoloration blended

and the anger quieted

and the violence aged to weakness

and the fear retired

i was dangling from the wings of isanity.

and no matter how hard i tried

to keep my crack concealed

on any given day

on every given day

from the bottom of my feet

to the top of my head

i could feel insanity RISING

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On June 1st 2008 kissofasia Said :
kissofasia awwww,its great and very well written...
On March 20th 2008 beautiful332 Said :
beautiful332 it is so great?
On January 8th 2008 KaosQueen Said :
KaosQueen ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh this is amazing!!
On December 30th 2007 sparklefungurl Said :
sparklefungurl wowie!(A.K.A Ms.Kirby) it's so deep and intellectual
On October 30th 2007 VeraNoel Said :
VeraNoel SWEET ITS AWESOME
On October 29th 2007 mooseguy32 Said :
mooseguy32 hmm you should turn it into song lyrics think that woulld be cool
On October 29th 2007 rumcake2daend Said :
rumcake2daend well you dont have to tell us what ur feeling we can tell by the way you write. i love it! and this is exactly how i feel every day.....
On October 29th 2007 mccallrenee Said :
mccallrenee this is so good keep up the good work with both ur stories and ur poems als cant wait to read ur new story 'misunderstood'
On October 29th 2007 lilpapa4421 Said :
lilpapa4421 omg this is really good
On October 29th 2007 angelofpurity5 Said :
angelofpurity5 HOPE YOU GUYS LIKE MY POEM AT THE TIME I WAS FEELING A LITTLE DOWN AND ON THE VERGE OF INSANITY