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INSANITY RISING
by the time
the cut has scabbed
and the bump healed
and the bruise disappeared
and the welt went down
and the tears dried
and the dent unbent
and the scars smoothed
and the discoloration blended
and the anger quieted
and the violence aged to weakness
and the fear retired
i was dangling from the wings of isanity.
and no matter how hard i tried
to keep my crack concealed
on any given day
on every given day
from the bottom of my feet
to the top of my head
i could feel insanity RISING
| On June 1st 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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awwww,its great and very well written... |
| On March 20th 2008 beautiful332 Said : | |
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it is so great? |
| On January 8th 2008 KaosQueen Said : | |
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ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh this is amazing!! |
| On December 30th 2007 sparklefungurl Said : | |
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wowie!(A.K.A Ms.Kirby) it's so deep and intellectual |
| On October 30th 2007 VeraNoel Said : | |
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SWEET ITS AWESOME |
| On October 29th 2007 mooseguy32 Said : | |
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hmm you should turn it into song lyrics think that woulld be cool |
| On October 29th 2007 rumcake2daend Said : | |
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well you dont have to tell us what ur feeling we can tell by the way you write. i love it! and this is exactly how i feel every day..... |
| On October 29th 2007 mccallrenee Said : | |
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this is so good keep up the good work with both ur stories and ur poems als cant wait to read ur new story 'misunderstood' |
| On October 29th 2007 lilpapa4421 Said : | |
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omg this is really good |
| On October 29th 2007 angelofpurity5 Said : | |
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HOPE YOU GUYS LIKE MY POEM AT THE TIME I WAS FEELING A LITTLE DOWN AND ON THE VERGE OF INSANITY |


