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i was pissed at my situation....Rate this Poem
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unntitled |
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Spectral Boy |
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introspect pain |
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welcome to my end of life |
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Always You Beside Me |
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GUYS!!!!!!! |
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this strong me |
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change |
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questions, no answers |
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tears |
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story scars |
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you(James)I |
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me/you |
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welcome to my end of life
so you want to kno about me
look to my brothers and maybe you'll see
the life i lead isn't like your own
and it started in Wisconsin, in a place i call home.
i guess it started when i turned three
my mom left for a while and brought back a baby!
but when she got home things just weren't the same
she tended the baby but come to cleaning she was lame
she didn't cook she didn't clean
till the dishes stacked up and started turning green
so i washed the dishes fed the pets
mopped the floors and all the rest.
time went by
my brothers got big
they had no manners
and acted like pigs
you see the clothes their wearing today?
those are the clothes i folded yesterday.
i wash them i fold them i put them away
do i ever get a thank you?not a chance!, no way!
they walk in the house
track mud everywhere
who gets out the brush
scrubs till her hands are bare?
who's the one who falls sleep
chin to chest every night of the week
not studying but folding clothes
shirts and sweats that belong to my bro's
"smile keidaah what's got you in a twist?"
(stupid my brothers are)
"are you mad at me starshine?"
I'M NOT MAD, I'M PISSED!
| On September 7th 2007 awakenasleep Said : | |
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O.o ow i think i finaly found someone who's had it harder then me lol nice job i like it a lot infact i may have to make one of a simmeler design of my own i love the format this is writen in, how it tells "your story"
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| On August 3rd 2007 bryannahuggin Said : | |
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it's really good. |
| On July 9th 2007 Aaquaian Said : | |
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Ouch... is this really true? If so, I'm so very sorry you have to deal with that... Those words sound heartless from someone who doesn't have to deal with that. |
| On June 8th 2007 xxxAngelicaxxx Said : | |
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wow this is deep |
| On June 7th 2007 saraann12345 Said : | |
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I LIKED THAT !!!! |
| On June 7th 2007 manda36274 Said : | |
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wow!!! |
| On April 14th 2007 knowlyfe Said : | |
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oh wow. is that true?? |


