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i was pissed at my situation....

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welcome to my end of life

Views (132) Anger Created on 4-13-07 Flag

so you want to kno about me

look to my brothers and maybe you'll see

the life i lead isn't like your own

and it started in Wisconsin, in a place i call home.

 

i guess it started when i turned three

my mom left for a while and brought back a baby!

but when she got home things just weren't the same

she tended the baby but come to cleaning she was lame

 

she didn't cook she didn't clean

till the dishes stacked up and started turning green

so i washed the dishes fed the pets

mopped the floors and all the rest.

 

time went by

my brothers got big

they had no manners

and acted like pigs

 

you see the clothes their wearing today?

those are the clothes i folded yesterday.

i wash them i fold them i put them away

do i ever get a thank you?not a chance!, no way!

 

they walk in the house

track mud everywhere

who gets out the brush

scrubs till her hands are bare?

 

who's the one who falls sleep

chin to chest every night of the week

not studying but folding clothes

shirts and sweats that belong to my bro's

"smile keidaah what's got you in a twist?"

(stupid my brothers are)

"are you mad at me starshine?"

I'M NOT MAD, I'M PISSED!

 

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On September 7th 2007 awakenasleep Said :
awakenasleep O.o ow i think i finaly found someone who's had it harder then me lol nice job i like it a lot infact i may have to make one of a simmeler design of my own i love the format this is writen in, how it tells "your story"
On August 3rd 2007 bryannahuggin Said :
bryannahuggin it's really good.
On July 9th 2007 Aaquaian Said :
Aaquaian Ouch... is this really true? If so, I'm so very sorry you have to deal with that... Those words sound heartless from someone who doesn't have to deal with that.
On June 8th 2007 xxxAngelicaxxx Said :
xxxAngelicaxxx wow this is deep
On June 7th 2007 saraann12345 Said :
my picture
I LIKED THAT !!!!
On June 7th 2007 manda36274 Said :
manda36274 wow!!!
On April 14th 2007 knowlyfe Said :
knowlyfe oh wow. is that true??