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Spectral Boy
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Created on 4-13-07
every night when the moon is high
someone goes whispering across the sky
he's always there i don't know why
i just watch as he makes his way across an empty sky
his peaceful tears so sad
shine bright real bright then dry
he seems so lonely he's trapped and it makes me mad
i know this boy, or so it seems
why else is he always inside of my dreams
the clock strikes the hours as i wait for the boy
to take his stroll across the sky
he appears on a different path
he walks right towards me
does he know i've been watching?
he's outside my window
tears fall from his eyes
a solitary tear falls into my hand
he smiles then he's gone
and i'm left with a pearl
and i slowly drift to sleep thinking of the lonely spectral boy.
Please Login to post comments| On July 9th 2007 Aaquaian Said : | |
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Yes, I can believe it. This poem really draws up an interest, and I reread a couple times before realizing I hadn't given it a vote. |
| On June 12th 2007 jessnumber3 Said : | |
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i'm not very good at this commenting thing but i like your poems alot |
| On June 7th 2007 Pooh455 Said : | |
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your really good. you know your a good writer when you can write things like this. |
| On June 6th 2007 Qurmudjin Said : | |
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With lines like "his peaceful tears so sad / shine bright real bright then dry" and "the clock strikes the hours as i wait for the boy / to take his stroll across the sky" I can see how this wonderful poem got published. |
