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it sucks i kno read it anyways

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Views (201) Love Created on 2-19-07 Flag

there's blood on her hands

and tears on her cheeks

when she calls the man

she'd been seeing for weeks

 

he takes control

she sits back and lets him

an ad in the paper

and no one suspects them.

 

one life lost

and no body found

yet the earth keeps on spinning

around and around.

 

the seasons change

and leaves turn to snow

the man left her

and she has no where to go.

 

when push came to shove

and he raised his voice

she raised a gun

and made her choice.

 

she runs from the memory

but can't seem to forget it

her life passed her by

and in guilt she let it.

 

she took a life

in a moment of pain

she lost sight of the love

she'd been trying to gain.

 

a moment of pleasure

one little mistake

she killed her true love

for a life of heartache.

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On September 7th 2007 awakenasleep Said :
awakenasleep DAMN NICE JOB
On September 5th 2007 manda36274 Said :
manda36274 your good!
On August 28th 2007 Anthonyn1991 Said :
Anthonyn1991 i literlly said "HOLY SHIT" This is one of the best poems I've ever read Your talented.
On August 17th 2007 simplyme16 Said :
simplyme16 Wow. It's amazing.
On June 12th 2007 jessnumber3 Said :
jessnumber3 i've read this poem over like countless times its one of my favorites
On June 12th 2007 earindle Said :
earindle I really like your poem!
On June 10th 2007 angelalone Said :
angelalone maybe qurmudjin is righ about my standards.i thought this poem was one of my worst:-)
On June 7th 2007 nikkineuha15 Said :
nikkineuha15 Wow, you are really good. It was very well written. If people make fun of this, they are losers. It's fine and dandy the way it is. It's awesome!!!
On June 7th 2007 Pooh455 Said :
Pooh455 holy cow. i loved it.
On June 7th 2007 fgggfx Said :
fgggfx holy fukin shit, thats really good, tragic and sad but still really good
On June 7th 2007 saraann12345 Said :
my picture
I REALLY LIKE IT!!
On June 6th 2007 Qurmudjin Said :
Qurmudjin ah—some poets just have impossibly high standards...
I like it just fine.
On March 6th 2007 Darkrisky Said :
Darkrisky i think it's good. i dunno why you think it sucks. O.o