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Suicide
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Created on 11-15-07
I slit my wrists at night
Away and out of sight
I don't like the bleeding to stop
I hear it go drip drop
I turn up my music loud
Sadly I;m never proud
I hear the rushing water fill up the tub
How I wish I could bash his head in with a club
I wait for it to be full
I wonder if I should use a pool
I make deep gashes in my arms
I hope none sounds the alarms
I get under the water and wait
They would never let me participate
My mother walks in my room
And it seems so dark and gloom
She finds me dead in the tub
How I wish I could bash his head in with a club
She looks at the mirror and sees written in blood
"He hates me now can't you see my life is full of misery.
Without his love I cannot live.
I'm sorry mom I love you so but it's my time to go."
Standing there she cries
ANd asks God why
Away and out of sight
I don't like the bleeding to stop
I hear it go drip drop
I turn up my music loud
Sadly I;m never proud
I hear the rushing water fill up the tub
How I wish I could bash his head in with a club
I wait for it to be full
I wonder if I should use a pool
I make deep gashes in my arms
I hope none sounds the alarms
I get under the water and wait
They would never let me participate
My mother walks in my room
And it seems so dark and gloom
She finds me dead in the tub
How I wish I could bash his head in with a club
She looks at the mirror and sees written in blood
"He hates me now can't you see my life is full of misery.
Without his love I cannot live.
I'm sorry mom I love you so but it's my time to go."
Standing there she cries
ANd asks God why
Please Login to post comments| On February 4th 2008 Dashtiya Said : | |
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OMG I feel like I'm in horror movie or something!!!
that is deep but I'd never kill myself for anyone!!! |
| On December 31st 2007 xxKatieKaresxx Said : | |
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i love it. :) great work. |
