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Crying is a release,to let the tears floRate this Poem
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Created:
10/18 2007
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428
Category:
Fear
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Anger
Crying is a release
to let the tears flow
flowing out the anger, dwelling deep inside
making us sane again
Imagine a red hot flame
slowly comsuming
slowly eating away at you
making you want to hurt or kill
You cant put it out, steadily it grows
You cant control it, its coming further up
You can only shout, but still it degrades
You can only scream , but still knowing no help in return
It doesnt care what life you lead
the other feelings that live inside
It only cares about taking you away
And any sanity that dares to dwell
(honest comments much appreciated)
Please Login to post comments| On October 26th 2007 alexia66 Said: |
| il wil just make it clear i wrote this STRIGHT from my mind and i was only HALF thinking i made this again il post it soon |
| On October 25th 2007 19dudett92 Said: |
| i kinga agree with the first comment, it's good but i think you could do better |
| On October 24th 2007 J3w3llC82890 Said: |
| i realy lke it.
~*Jewell*~ |
| On October 18th 2007 transgenic Said: |
| Great word choice! |
| On October 18th 2007 Xpoetxgurlx Said: |
| really good poem! i looove it =D |
| On October 18th 2007 Pikkakard Said: |
| The imagery is pretty good in this one. You know I already like your style and content, and you are getting better with each one you write. |
| On October 18th 2007 ynot4u2hold Said: |
| I love it. great job. I agree with the two posters that posted comments before me. Keep up the excellent work. |
| On October 18th 2007 pru1989 Said: |
| i really do love this it is fantastic and very relatable........ well for me awsome job |
| On October 18th 2007 emily28793 Said: |
| awsum poem...i love it! |
