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Crying is a release,to let the tears flo

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Anger

Views (323) Fear Created on 10-18-07 Flag

Crying is a release
to let the tears flow
flowing out the anger, dwelling deep inside
making us sane again

Imagine a red hot flame
slowly comsuming
slowly eating away at you
making you want to hurt or kill

You cant put it out, steadily it grows
You cant control it, its coming further up
You can only shout, but still it degrades
You can only scream , but still knowing no help in return

It doesnt care what life you lead
the other feelings that live inside
It only cares about taking you away
And any sanity that dares to dwell

 

 

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On October 26th 2007 alexia66 Said :
alexia66 il wil just make it clear i wrote this STRIGHT from my mind and i was only HALF thinking i made this again il post it soon
On October 25th 2007 19dudett92 Said :
19dudett92 i kinga agree with the first comment, it's good but i think you could do better
On October 24th 2007 J3w3llC82890 Said :
J3w3llC82890 i realy lke it. ~*Jewell*~
On October 18th 2007 transgenic Said :
transgenic Great word choice!
On October 18th 2007 Xpoetxgurlx Said :
Xpoetxgurlx really good poem! i looove it =D
On October 18th 2007 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard The imagery is pretty good in this one.

You know I already like your style and content, and you are getting better with each one you write.
On October 18th 2007 ynot4u2hold Said :
ynot4u2hold I love it. great job. I agree with the two posters that posted comments before me. Keep up the excellent work.
On October 18th 2007 pru1989 Said :
pru1989 i really do love this it is fantastic and very relatable........ well for me awsome job
On October 18th 2007 emily28793 Said :
emily28793 awsum poem...i love it!
On October 18th 2007 numbbbb0z Said :
numbbbb0z Sanity? Hah! What a joke. Just like expecting help. Good poem, nontheless. You can still do better. You're improving. "Imagine a red hot flame slowly consuming and eating away at you". You CAN do better. Dig deeper, and deeper. Into that emotional cave you hide in with your deepest darkest fears and thoughts.