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Created:
06/27 2007
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81
Category:
Pain
My Poems
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12
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Purple Lust |
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8
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Impossible Oblivion |
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5
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Object Affection |
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7
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Death In Solitude |
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6
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ALL |
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6
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Dwell the Color of the Rose |
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5
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Up and Down |
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10
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Explain the Rush |
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0
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Weak |
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1
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Mare (obsolete) |
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0
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Tell Me Something New |
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2
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Late Summer Nights |
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1
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Exasperation of our Essence |
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Trapped |
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My hair is long
Sweat pours from my pores
i tear my skin
The wish for scissors comes over me
I rub my fingers over my face
Shift my feet from their position
The bed sheets are dirty
Gluttuny of food
Breath smells of gastric acid
Sloth as i try to fall into the slope of my bed
My skin palmy, sweaty, humid, soft, brown
The feeling of desolation, nothingness
Is this all?
Wall soffocates my lungs
Cooks my resting forearms
Another day to pass, another day to wait.
Please Login to post comments| On July 23rd 2007 PoeticPang Said: |
| "gluttony".... "suffocates",,,, hmmmm,, for a moment there in the middle when u were using the seven sins,, i was starting to image scenes from the anime "Full Metal Alchemist".., u seen>,,,,,,,,,,,, hmmmm,,, interesting,,,i like the twist of descriptions in each line that gave what u not only felt,, but what u were surrounded in........... very profound and strikingly ,, well,, i feel i've felt this inkling before?........... good metaphors too,,, and overall,, the imagery is superb,,, very enjoyable,, ,interesting,, great job!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Pang |
| On June 28th 2007 California1516 Said: |
| hmmm interesting.. |
